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GodOfDeath1999

GodOfDeath1999

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2020-02-19 BergabungGlobal
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  • GodOfDeath1999
    GodOfDeath19992h
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    I think you got your series mixed up

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  • GodOfDeath1999
    GodOfDeath19998h
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    My bad well you are right though not much of a difference.

    The young man's name was Yang Chen and He had just turned eighteen three days ago.
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  • GodOfDeath1999
    GodOfDeath199912h
    Balas Cultured_Daoist69

    Well I'll trust you I guess

    " Haah~ the journey of his growth will change the life of many realms... And it's all on the hands of profound being that can't be imaged by a mere immortal, even gods are inferior to them... *Huff* THE CONSTELLATIONS! " while saying that, her breath quickens with goosebumps all over her body.
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  • GodOfDeath1999
    GodOfDeath199915h
    Balas Writersblockills

    So she didn't test to see wether or not her master had come back? Sigh it's kinda amazing how these two can be so smart yet so hopeless in so many other ways.

    It was the middle of the night and Aurora was on her way back to her room, she'd been away from her sisters and whispering poison into Zeil's ears while Avarice was forced to do meaningless chores by the new king. However, only halfway through the hallway, she felt something sharp piercing through her back. She tried to scream but her mouth was shut by cold metallic fingers.
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    GodOfDeath199916h
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    ?

    " Haah~ the journey of his growth will change the life of many realms... And it's all on the hands of profound being that can't be imaged by a mere immortal, even gods are inferior to them... *Huff* THE CONSTELLATIONS! " while saying that, her breath quickens with goosebumps all over her body.
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  • GodOfDeath1999
    GodOfDeath199916h
    Balas Writersblockills

    So sooner or later a rebellion would have happned or the king would be assasinated. So just out of curiosity why didn't Mono prepare a kill/off switch in case thing went wrong? And why didn't her student start preparing to face Avarcice ahead of time? Did she just assume the day would never come when she would have to face Avarice?

    It was the middle of the night and Aurora was on her way back to her room, she'd been away from her sisters and whispering poison into Zeil's ears while Avarice was forced to do meaningless chores by the new king. However, only halfway through the hallway, she felt something sharp piercing through her back. She tried to scream but her mouth was shut by cold metallic fingers.
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  • GodOfDeath1999
    GodOfDeath199917h
    Balas Writersblockills

    Wow I'm surprised you responded to one of my comments. So let me get this straight there are no guards, no council, and nobody respects or acknowledges this new king correct? So at the moment the king has no power whatsoever and there's a strong chance of rebellion from the nobles?

    It was the middle of the night and Aurora was on her way back to her room, she'd been away from her sisters and whispering poison into Zeil's ears while Avarice was forced to do meaningless chores by the new king. However, only halfway through the hallway, she felt something sharp piercing through her back. She tried to scream but her mouth was shut by cold metallic fingers.
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  • GodOfDeath1999
    GodOfDeath199917h
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    So blood stains would show a trail to the body and show what really happened to her.

    The next thing she knew, her eyes grew tired and her mind hazier than ever. Her blood pooled on the ground as her body continued to lose strength. Eventually, after her consciousness slipped away, her attacker picked her up in their arms and took them down into the dungeon. Making sure to cover her face and body with a rag, Aurora was sneaked in like many other bodies that were often fed to the abominations trapped underneath the castle.
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  • GodOfDeath1999
    GodOfDeath199917h
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    So let me get this straight the castle is supposed to be heavily guarded at any point in time and the knights and guards are meant to guard the royalty of which there are 4 yet nobody was around to see this happen? There at limits to incompetence.

    It was the middle of the night and Aurora was on her way back to her room, she'd been away from her sisters and whispering poison into Zeil's ears while Avarice was forced to do meaningless chores by the new king. However, only halfway through the hallway, she felt something sharp piercing through her back. She tried to scream but her mouth was shut by cold metallic fingers.
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  • GodOfDeath1999
    GodOfDeath199918h
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    This was one of the mistakes of the previous novel though?

    " Haah~ the journey of his growth will change the life of many realms... And it's all on the hands of profound being that can't be imaged by a mere immortal, even gods are inferior to them... *Huff* THE CONSTELLATIONS! " while saying that, her breath quickens with goosebumps all over her body.
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  • GodOfDeath1999
    GodOfDeath199918h
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    Yet he got offed by a third rate protagonist

    "His arrival heralds a fate that will change the course of human destiny...that's not a mere Dragonborn, that's the destroyer!"
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  • GodOfDeath1999
    GodOfDeath19991d
    Balas Cultured_Daoist69

    Alright I'm kinda worried that the story will start taking a dive one you run out of content from the previous novel make sure to think about where you want the story to go and take the time to properly flush out the harem.

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    What about suggest mommy?

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    So how often will the new series get updates?

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    she

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    Hopefully she can avoid the side effects of sleeping with someone besides her dao companion.

    Ch 8 Progress?
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    GodOfDeath19991d
    Balas Cultured_Daoist69

    So is she the main heroine?

    Ch 7 Oh My! Saw something monstrous
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    W

    Ch 7 Oh My! Saw something monstrous
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  • GodOfDeath1999
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    Personally I never got this saying I mean if everything is supposedly given by heaven and the job of cultivators is to go against it to obtain immortality why would it be jealous? Rather heaven usually isn't a physical entity.

    "Impossible... Heavens are jealous of this child! This child is a once-in-a- Nirvana Qi Flow cycle child,"
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  • GodOfDeath1999
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    He kinda is at this point although I've kinda changed my mind now I don't really mind if one of the cast gets killed off at this point honestly kinda hoping it's Mel.

    'They'll die even with this won't they?' And though their intentions differed like the poles, the witch and the goddess were both on the same page over the hero party's survival.
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