Alan_Soto

Le dará una paliza a jayce, ya lo veo

I guess, I think it's more my personal opinion.

How difficult is it to cope in the coming seasons Will he let Vander die? Will Powder get lost in his traumas until he becomes Jinx? It's hard to know what the author will do. and I prefer not to know, it takes away the joke from the whole reading

A mí me pareció más un poco de amistad, son niños. Imagino que no es nada serio Más adelante posiblemente sean como bros Violet es lesbiana desde la beta en los juegos, sería raro cambiarlo

Excelente, sigue asi. Soy adicto

Consider the reunion scene between Ekko and Vi, for me Orion with his passive aggressive attitude would make Vi start a fight, but possibly I'm wrong

What he says has merit, but I don't think Vander looks at Orion the same way he does Silco in this situation, as far as he should see, Orion stayed behind so the children could escape. Violence bothers him yes, but he is weak with children, not only Vi and Powder, Claggor and Mylo show it. Besides, it was his order that made his parents disappear, that's what counts. in his world maybe little, but he does it Although you don't necessarily have to put him in charge, you could also say that Orion's words should be heard in the same way as Violet's.

What I said definitely seemed presumptuous, sorry.

You had said that you didn't know what to do with vi, in the original you don't know. Since this is your imagination, but what if you punish her by having Vander give command to Orion? It would be a suitable punishment for her. She is too used to giving orders and easily disobeys those of Vander himself. You could also make Vander promise to take back command if he behaves well. classic stick and carrot

Thanks for the chapter