Okay I will surely be there

This story is really great, the character development is easy to follow and the scene can be pictured and not that out of context, I really appreciate what the author did here, I hope he keeps updating cause this is a good story

Thanks I appreciate

Thanks he will change for better with time, currently he is still fifteen haven't even been expose to real life since he has been living with his parents, promise he will do better

Okay your what is your book name

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Okay

Thanks I really appreciate you reading and encouraging me through your comment

Thanks I really appreciate your comment, will work hard enough not to disappoint you

Good story so far, keep up the good work, the setting is amazing, will make anybody want to read more, keep up the good work, am sure you are going to go places with this

Started it newly will try to raise my word count

Thanks I will try to update more often, your encouragement is really appreciated

Thanks

So far this story is great, the first chapter development seems a little rushed but right from there onward everything flow perfect, keep up the good work

thanks, i appreciate, was just considering dropping it today due to an editor telling it not the normal trend and will not be accepted

thanks, as a new writer i really appreciate the feedback

i am the author, i somehow lost my phone and sim and don't remember the email password, i am thinking of moving the story and completing it to the new account i created but that will really be a stress, i don't know if anyone is interested to read it, if at least i get one single person interested in reading it, i will move it and complete it