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Kiyaji

Kiyaji

Lv13

Hi I'm an antisocial comic consumer

2020-01-28 BergabungUnited States
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Tulisan

25.6h

membaca

35

Membaca buku-buku

Lencana
12
Momen
6
  • Kiyaji2 years ago
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    Interesting characters and nice pacing! I love to see the improvement in writing with each chapter. Easy to follow along. Keep it the good work!

  • Kiyaji2 years ago
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    I'm not typically one for the harem genre, but this one pulled me in. An interesting concept, and I love the added system! The writing flows really well, and there's a nice balance between dialogue and narration.

  • Kiyaji2 years ago
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    It's interesting to see how the author improves with each chapter! I like the dialogue, but I'd also love to see more narration and detail. Excited to see how the story progresses! Keep it up :)

  • Kiyaji2 years ago
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    This novel has great potential- it has an interesting and engaging concept, and the depth of narration pulls you in. There are errors in grammar and punctuation; I suggest that the author proofread and take their time to ensure a better flow of sentences. I'll keep an eye on this novel; I'm excited to see how it progresses, and I'm looking forward to future updates!

  • Kiyaji2 years ago
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    The author has a very strong narrative voice, and I like the balance of conversation. Nice long chapters and an interesting concept that pulls you in to read more! I can't wait to read future updates!

  • Kiyaji2 years ago
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    Very interesting read, it's nice to see how the story progresses and i'm interested in reading more! Dialogue is fun and the whole story is captivating