MikomiMirai
I like Cats
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Here's Danzo with his empty threats
I mean with the MCs decisions I think it's a miracle he got a janitorial job
Ice
Why'd you make the mc monologue about protecting his children if his going to act like this? Is this supposed to be comedy?
Earlier chapters were entertaining despite the slow progression, as the idea or concept of the fanfic was 'unique' in my view as I hadn't read any similar fics at that time. After the author finished the 'minecraft arc' it started to become dull and boring, as the interaction of the MC with other characters felt forced or unnatural. Furthermore the MC's reasoning on why he chose Fortnite was weak, I mean in the earlier chapters wasn't shooter games congested? as such wouldn't games like Dark Souls, Monster Hunter, etc. be more suitable and unique. Lastly making the MC traverse into other worlds was probably what made it boring for me, as this concept is common nowadays, and a lot of such fic have longer chapters and consistent update schedules.
The story is good, it was quite enjoyable to read for the first few chapters. After that everything felt repetitive and super slow. Most chapters are almost spent on the MCs monologue, rather than character interactions. Though hopefully this fanfic can have a satisfying conclusion unlike the authors other fanfics
The story started out great, it was entertaining until the world hopping quests started. If it was properly executed then the story might have been great all through out. Relationships for me felt rushed as the girls would immediately accept being in a harem after a few words or chapter. Next is that since the story kept jumping from world to world, it felt confusing at some parts. Lastly the system, I think this should be named as parody system instead of harem, cause it felt like some parody fiction, due to the systems action as well as the MCs. though I guess being a parody matches the MCs main world which is konosuba
Started great up until the author started adding arcs which brought nothing to the MC. It would have been better if the author expounded on the various features of the chat group. Instead the author just stated that a lot of items in the 'store' feature is pricey. If the author had expounded on it then the going to fairy tail just to control my pleasure magic arc would have been avoided.