IMoney

Ok thank you

I plan on Doing Character development and I wasnt sure how to do that with my previous character, dont worry though his personality will end up similar except more rational and shameless

I Think he Should have more character development, if Someone had to constantly fight to survive i feel like they would be more ruthless and self profit oriented. Thats just my opinion though.

I like how the main character Is the Top Usually thats not the case I also like the romance between the MC and ML stories like these always make me have a high expectation of love. I really am enjoying this book so far and i cant wait to see what comes next.

The quality isnt the greatest but its not like the authors getting paid they dont allow powerstones and even if they did I wouldnt be mad. Despite the translation I like the story.

Why do they keep talking about how ‘alluring’ she is, she’s his sister.

I think it’d be better if you put more space, as in make the Paragraphs smaller this isn’t an insult it’s just difficult for some people including me to focus on non spaced out paragraphs.

Do you have a discord? (like for Your novels)

I was just wondering how come its not possible for me to Give this book power stones?

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