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That wasn't in the teen wolf canon but you just proved my point. What is, in the teen wolf canon, however is that the more they use/sacrifice to the Nemeton, the more that draws I supernatural. And you've proved my point by giving more reason to their presence than this fic has. But instead we have no reason as for why there are more monsters but no worries, because we "conveniently" have half a dozen super betas to turn to alphas. So these new additions will pose no threat and have no meaning whatsoever.

I agree with you there and I'm not tryna whine, but tell me you don't feel it too? That there's not really any story to the story anymore. That things are just happening to say that they happened.

You're taking this the wrong way man. I love your fic it just feels like you've stopped trying or you've run out of ideas.

Previous comments aside I don't hate this fic. In fact I love all the steps the author took to get here. Scott's actions, growth and inclusion of all the teen characters are cool. But it feels like things are just happening, so there are things to happen. That whole thing with Kate returning, and Gerard joining her, not to mention the amount of times they were even let off in the first place.... Even the random supernatural just show up to be taken down. The alpha pack feels like a 'Oh and they're here' and the Darachs are just surviving to make us feel like there's still some shadow lurking. We haven't even been given a reason as so why there's more than just Jennifer! I just feel that if when Scott first transmigrated, he woke up on top of the Nemeton, it would explain both the increase in supernaturals showing up and why there are multiple Darachs. But no.......shit happens because shit needs to happen. Forget logic, forget plot, forget established character traits, we ball.

We get that Super Alpha Scott has Super Betas but is this really what this fic has come to? Just sum it all in 4 lines? At this point might as well speedblitz the other seasons in the same school year.

I didn't care enough to comment before but this is all really tiring now. First the introduction of random hobos ONLY for the purpose of making them all alphas. Now it's making every other character an idiot just to make things oh so convenient for Scott and his pack, and this has been happening for a while now. Like cmon, really? Rushes into an entire pack of about 10 werewolves alone? First Kate, then Chris, then Gerard, now all of Deucalion's pack. This is honestly losing all of the interest the beginning chapters built.

I love Toriko. Hella under-rated anime in my opinion.

Oh wow just F Stiles right? 😂 Choosing the mother I law over the homie is madness.

I'll say it seeing as no one else will, the author is really just butchering Kate, Chis and Gerard's characters just for the sake of making another big bad. First of all, all of Kate's behavior at first was on point with her being a bitch but after Gerard shot her and Scott healed her, author made it seem like a real changing moment for her. She didn't hate and was even thankful to Scott, she understood that her father was a terrible person and that her old ways were wrong and she left to move on. That was good. But now all of a sudden she somehow hates Scott again and even though I understand her alpha is who wanted Gerard alive to help them, her just being told that once and then being "Alright, let's get back to killing Scott" is so out of character for her. She has no reason to hate Scott at this point. In fact she has way more reason to hate Gerard. When the chapter ended with her finding Gerard we all expected a beautiful tie off to all of that but instead we got a "Okay fine let's work together to kill Scott because we're evil and we won't change" bs. I understand Gerard being this single minded because in his twisted little head, it's all Scott and Derek's fault but Author really just did Kate dirty.

Thanks for the chapter. I was so absorbed in every word 😂