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The story is rather interesting so far. I will say it's not too are in the have much world background, but where it's at, you have enough understanding of what is going on and a background. I really do like the characters so far you can tell they were well thought out and they do have their differences to actually make it feel like they are different individuals. The story is getting pretty interesting, especially with where things are going. So far I am enjoying this story greatly!
Dang Zein is going through this hard. I could only imagine. I've had some very close family members pass away these past few years, and some days are easier than others. I hope he can find peace with his feelings that his brothers are gone. Confiding with others is one thing, but letting go of regrets personally is another.
First off if you continue posting on this story or re-uploading I will still support the book. I think the re-upload would depend on how many or how much of a change you will do to the story. I wouldn't want you to repost for the contest and feel pressured into writing more or posting more often if that is a requirement for the contest. Being under pressure to write isn't always good for an author. But either way I'm good with either. If the changes you are going to make are a lot or effect the story in a big way then you might want to repost it. In the end of it all, the story is fantastic and I enjoy it greatly. So keep up the great work!