NowGoWithTheFlow

One thing I hate happening is when a system messes with the MC in a bad way. Why the heck you call this the one piece world it's not. It may resemble one piece but it's not. Also I read isekai because I like mc changing the story themselves but this no it's just sh*t story. The MC is in a already changed an different one piece world that doesn't make sense.

This book was written in a way that the author only understood. First couple chapters I know you summon goku, but which goku is what I wanna know. Like was goku a child, what's his power level or what arc did you summon goku from. Also since your in dragonball universe an summoned goku, will there be 2 goku or did you just summon goku from the same universe? An really I just don't like you summoning characters from same universe it makes everything complicated.

Don't read this. It is a tease. Just when you think there might be sex it stops. Many blueball scenes an then continue the story then repeat to being blueballed. Plot is super slow MC is beta an won't take action.

A ok read to pass the time. It's readable an grammar is ok. That's all though, the MC is dumb while not trying to change the story an just following the main cast. MC is justify by saying to make them stronger which MC is failing hard on. The whole premise is to change plot ending of MHA, doesn't mean you have to make main cast stronger. There are so many ways to make the ending different but MC does the dumbest way. For reference make the MC the strongest an the ending would naturally change.

Have you the author ever read or seen naruto. Your MC has a army but MC acts dumb an retarded say it won't do anything over an over. You have a spaceship you could literally bombard the planet whenever you want or just throw big rocks down from space. 5 chapters get you nowhere it just repeats itself with different wording, which is basically word count. At least if you write a fanfic of naruto at least watch it or research it.

So hard to read this. MC has no sense while acting retarded. Half of the chapter is dedicated to bragging about himself while the other half is.... well I don't know how to describe it. Not worth reading this at all.

So slow, reading a chapter gets you nowhere. I might not read this anymore for being so slow. An I am not talking about MC not getting powerful fast no I am talking about how it takes 2 or more chapters to move the plot by a few hours or days an still get nowhere.

In a world of reverse gender roles our MC that was transported there from our world should act like a man, but really acts like a women. What does it take for an author actually write a MC that acts like a man which will never come.

This was a great book. Was.... chapter 52 it went all downhill. For no reason under watch of an entire bodyguard unit an then a entire planet both of them gets capture by a bounty hunter an transported to another planet. You mights as well kill them off an end this book. Before chapter 52 this novel had long chapters, ok gramer, good plot an very intriguing political view point. I liked how he built a military an was able to justify it to the senate. Although I personally don't like how the MC takes the lead in fighting by charging ahead of everyone basically joining the infantry.

Great book to pass the time. The novel updates are fast the chapters are very long just the way I like. The author you have my gratitude because not many authors will write about nazi, an those who do I don't particularly like. This novel is very great to read. The way you wrote the political an military views are top notch, though some sentences an word are either miss spelled, or don't make sense as you read it. That issue doesn't make the novel any worse at all though. I will be reading this whole novel so author don't drop this please.