Sole_on_fire

Not good, but could be improved... Some dialogues are missing quotation marks, which makes it hard to know whether a character is talking... . Regarding the story... Just another MC following the protagonist like a lost pet.. He's supposed to be OP but he isn't applying his gifts properly... Also he isn't using his metaknowledge properly, he acts as if he's an OC that doesnt know arifureta..

No OCs

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Make it so the Justice League was formed just to know who's the one behind the shenanigans he did like in Mother's day...

Create a Justice League but he isn't a part of it.. It would be interesting to see how the Justice League could be formed without Batman's involvement. Like zero involvement with the league and no personal/work relationship with any member of the league.

For real... Using Kph would actually be much better... Mach is just not the right unit for speed stats..

You shouldn't be using mach as a unit for his speed stats... I think even the fastest jets have'nt reached mach10 yet... ... Kph is much better and realistic...

For real... He is supposed to be poor kid... And then he proceeded to provoke someone in a gang.. someone that knows his identity and where he lives.. It is legit stupid...

Cant he use D4C, to escape and live peacefully... Or another stand to change the results???

Why is that Robbin Parkers still alive then??? Someone with Dormammu's Powers!!!! Ancient One should have dealt with him already right? Because that is exactly one of her purposes??? Please give me a good reason....