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Don_Fluffles7mthBalas SaintInfernalNeosFlameclaw is the original author, he's on fanfiction.net
Buku ini telah dihapus.- Don_Fluffles8mthBalas TigerTail
He can still bleed, it’s just that it won’t show
"Oh, you don't have to worry about that Charles, I don't get 'hurt'. Only lose health points." That made him stop and blink. Health points? He has heard of that term before, just that he couldn't place where. - Don_Fluffles1yrBalas Gabichu_Yeah
When you don't post proof of the author giving you permission, it's usually meaning that they're stealing since they could have easily just posted the proof and not get any hate for it. Besides, this is Webnovel. It's super easy to take anyone's work and post it as your own with just a few clicks, they don't care here.
- Don_Fluffles1yrBalas Gabichu_Yeah
- Don_Fluffles1yrBalas Fadli_9746
Yeah, Mc's cringe like that
"You know," I begin softly, "There was a man who told me something once and I've lived by it since." Slowly, I put my arm forward and in the palm of my hand I lit up a fire. "There is no road to almightiness for those using borrowed strength." - Don_Fluffles1yrBerkomentarCh 12 Chapter 12: The Phoenix Clan/Lore
- Don_Fluffles1yrDiterbitkan
I'll begin by saying that I enjoyed this fic, a lot. It's good. Sadly, I think the author is burnt out or just doesn't even know how to continue to progress his story. The beginning of this story is amazing, solid development of characters and world building. Even the MHA arc was good, if a little scattered because of the no planning when the author went there. Now, why am I dropping this? Well, it's easy to say. After that interview where the MC talked about the world and revealed stuff, this whole story has been going downhill. The MC now feels like a Mary Sue, the characters feel bland and you never get to see the characters in their Natural habitats. Worse, the author is going with this, "My MC is not a pervert, he's a gentleman but he'll watch as a girl cum herself on his blood." Yeah, the author began focusing too much on making the MC perfect and projecting to make the story feel like going anywhere. I really hope that this review will do anything to help the author because I really want to go back and enjoy this story. It's so well written, even if the grammar leaves things to be desired.
- Don_Fluffles1yrBerkomentarApollo immediately took back the power he'd given to his bow and arrow and jumped back while using his final card, running away.
- Don_Fluffles1yrBalas CrystalDranzerThe soul was dumbfounded by the brilliance of God, his mind had shut down for while in the bask of God's brilliance, after a few moments, his mind restarted as soon as his mind started to work the first thing he said " I am sorry for calling you coward. I am blessed for having even your glimpse, oh Almighty may I ask you why I am given this glorious opportunity to be in the presence of yourself".
- Don_Fluffles1yrBalas Sinofwrath
What makes you ask that question?
Continuing walking inside, he made sure to hold both of their shoulders in case they walked in another direction. They continued on until they got to the center of the house where the coffin of Song Guang was. - Don_Fluffles1yrBalas Abyss_123
It’s the same thing, just different words
I was only 19 at the time, but their death was crushing. I was close to my parents, we had a great relationship. After that, I fell into depression and even signed out of college- "You alright, Yun'er?" - Don_Fluffles1yrBalas klim_kuku
Sadly, the Yun doesn't know that so he's just going with what he thinks works. It's an unreliable narrator type of situation.
Sigh, I should just focus on these runes for now, see what type of formation's I can make. I do want to make a flying sword after all. - Don_Fluffles1yrBerkomentarCh 1 Chapter 1: Era of the Beast Master
- Don_Fluffles1yrBalas Alastor_The_SCP
He’s a child, they saw stuff like this all the time.
"I also marry Yun!" Yuanba joined into the fray, making us laugh. - Don_Fluffles1yrBalas Nico_bolas
Nah, it's still there
The door opened slowly and someone who I knew yet only have seen in fiction came in. It was Raven.