PancakesWitch
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the twins named Surtr actually, Drake just doesnt know and assume it was Muspel who called him Surtr
you forget about a lot of things
that's starting from level 300
that's not something that must be done all the time, that's a very big misconception, show and telling must be balanced together and always go hand by hand, to create a properly enganging narrative, you have to both show and tell almost i equal measures, only showing works with visual things such as manga/webtoon and series/movies/anime, these are all written words, telling is always required, especially for things that dont really matter, you usually use show when there's something mysterious you want the reader to guess what it is and that's plot relevant... not just some video games a dude bought. this paragraph is clearly made to show us that the protagonist is a carefree gamer without much life aspirations, as he would rather spend all his savings on games than in anything important for his future.
also yeah most likely, lucifer fight will be as long as Bestellen, but i doubt it'll be longer than that. Anyways, as I said before, its better to wait until more chapters accumulate for two weeks, or I would even recommend to wait a month to get a good amount of chapters to read in a row, as they're very short
well, would you have had the same reaction if all 12 chapters were dropped in the same day? each chapter is barely 1k words, and if I want to write a fight that's 12k words with all the details I like, i have to divide it into 12 chapters. A fight like this was never going to be resolved in 3 chapters, never. Bestellen is a tremendously powerful foe, and Blake's whole plan was to slowly wear him down with every trump card he had, if I had skipped all of that, there would be little entertainment at all and everything would feel dull, even more, the achievement of winning against him would also not feel earned because the fight would have been skipped. Similar battles like those against Beelzebub and Satan were similarly longer and nobody complained. I think you mostly feel this way because you had to wait for 1 chapter each day, I would recomend you to wait a few weeks for chapters to accumulate if you are not good with patience
she was being cold and not wanting to create an emotional connection with them to protect them, because yandere heavenly will would try to kill them to torture her in some way or another. this way even when she's gone they're fine, the heavenly will hasnt even paid attention to them
he has fought several Ancient Gods who were already born stronger than Venerables at their peak. Pandemonium is not at his peak of power either though, he's missing several parts to complete himself, as of now he barely has like 20% of his strenght.