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Justheguy

Justheguy

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Don’t criticise fanfics that doesn’t suit you. It’s just a waste of time.

2019-12-19 BergabungAustralia
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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy2yr
    Diterbitkan

    I quite loike it. Though the generic 'acne-faced' weak protagonist is a bit far-fetched in my opinion, but I like the execution and style you're giving it. Just needs like a theme or a right feel on the thing...

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy2yr
    Diterbitkan

    I like the world building and world setting you've first introduced. Space, some history behind the cadet's backgrounds makes it to hook the reader in. I quite like it. Still, you put way too many commars (,) and make the sentences pause and pause interrupting the story dialogue. Just imagine as if you're the one talking and narrating the story. Thx I gotta go bye!

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy2yr
    Balas Not_ayin

    no

    Ch 70 Terrifying Fate of Purple Bananas
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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Berkomentar

    Any thoughts or comments? Please give your opinions on this chapter.

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas DaoistSoulDive

    Well, it has to do with his Semblance that effected him...

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas the_game01234567

    No, that was Last Jedi.

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas Dao_of_Melancholy

    After all, it wouldn't be interesting if he became a baby-snatching, brainwashing, sociapath serving "the Light", instead of lightning-throwing, planet-killing, badass Dark Lord of the Sith. But he ain't Revan, I can tell you that. Man's too badass to die.

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Berkomentar

    Please comment your thoughts of this chapter. I would like to hear your opinions.

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas Lustsifer

    No, it's dead I'm afraid. Life happened. I wasn't eager to continue this story because I felt disappointed from it. Though, I'm working on a new different fanfic, its called RWBY: Jedi of Skywalker if you want to check it out.

    [AN: Due to his experience of the multiverse, Mark is very almost undetectable since he learnt from the Masters of the Shadows such as: Shinobi, League of Shadows, Sherlock Holmes (Movie), Spartans (Halo), Kingsman Agents, The Creed (Assassin's Creed), John Wick, and the Dark Knight (Batman).]
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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas Lustsifer

    Enemy Ninja POV: Yo why is there a blond kid wearing bright orange jumpsuit in the middle of the night-

    [AN: Due to his experience of the multiverse, Mark is very almost undetectable since he learnt from the Masters of the Shadows such as: Shinobi, League of Shadows, Sherlock Holmes (Movie), Spartans (Halo), Kingsman Agents, The Creed (Assassin's Creed), John Wick, and the Dark Knight (Batman).]
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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Berkomentar

    "DOUBLE KILL!"

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas PRLXThanatos

    Eh, whenever.

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Berkomentar

    https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=t0imaSCnSuA&ab_channel=AriannaStewart

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas Hi_Im_Aqua

    She's not in Hell, she's saying that this world feels like Hell

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas Avalon_EverDistant

    E. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Yeah, sure. Why not.

    F!!!
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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas BatCorn_Hi

    Well, Mark couldn't kill him. Who's to say Yang would?

    And I just realised that her eyes were staring at me. Giving an awkward look to Yang (even though she's dead) I slowly dropped her arm and closed her eyes. Rest in Peace. You may be the worst character, but you don't deserve this kind of shit.
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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas MannyTheManticore

    Fook. I didn't know.

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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
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    https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=YoaU3kRFvLg&ab_channel=DannyElfman-Topic

    [AN: The Batman Theme · Danny Elfman plays] (slowly reading this text is recommended while listening to the music)
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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas David_Drake

    Low IQ?

    Ch 37 The Most Dangerous Beast in the Entire Multiverse
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  • Justheguy
    Justheguy3yr
    Balas Naaaaaaa

    privatised

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