MrAkillies

chapter 1 is already a red flag

There is a lot inconsistency in the plot. The mc should be briefing the Viltrumite threats before making this bonding and training montage. Please plot the course properly for the chapters, overall its a good work just that the inconsistency in plots is kinda confusing.

The plot feels like a young master cultivation plot, the whole kidnapping, being an so called underdog then suddenly going to earth to flex his powers. It doesn't feel like an invincible book at all, the key elements that made invincible good has completely disappeared and distorted with typical chinese cultivation plots. Sure it's interesting at first but then when the plots thicken the climax doesn't feel right at all.

hmmmmm mostly unnecessary talks, i thought they were gonna breif him about the Viltrumite threats.

It's been a long waiting game.

I think I've read this before

Go with krieg route, start bagging the baddies or we could go multiverse by going after the incredible nemesis.

Make mc kill Thaedus

Yup but that's how mark is still stronger than allen in the comis due the Viltrumite gene of adaptation just minus the regeneration. So isn't it a bit repetitive to give mc adaptation ability, why not give him super regeneration? The Viltrumites are basically saiyans just minus the numerous saiyan forms.

The Vultrumite already have this?