It could be interesting but it’s only 6 chapters in and 1st year is already. Maybe try to add more things and beef up the story some.

It’s not that bad it just spices things up but I don’t like drama. Continue the book cause it’s one of the better twilight fanfics on this platform.

I shall give this 5 stars as its a good book even though I want to make u stub your toes for the drama in the later chapters.

I have read this story from many different authors and I can say so far this one is the best translated and fixed version so far so please keep it up.

It’s only 3 chapters so far but it’s better than most I’ve read.

I wonder how he’s gonna treat her and the other family members?

So far it’s been a pretty good read hope it stays good.

It’s only two chapters but I am loving this so far it’s pretty funny.

I am losing brain cells trying to read this. Names are wrong and alot of messed up writing.

I agree I’m reading the mlt and my brain hurts trying to understand half the things they say in it.

I like the idea so please keep it up and write more chapters.

I like it but you kind of have to turn off your brain sometimes because of the character names and translation is a little messed up.

I like the idea but they way it’s written is bad.

Can she assimilate the resurrection stone?

Interesting start I’ll do 5 stars as there isn’t many fics like this so please keep it up

Naruto

Go to dc and get raven

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I agree