moon_on_the_water

You seem to have missed a few chapters.

Against gloomy realism. I read fan fiction for the sake of immersing myself in a dream.

To be honest, it's terrible. The incoherent hasty narration makes you sympathize with the author and wonder if he is in a fever. However, maybe this will change by the later chapters, I want to treat such authors positively and believe in their growth above themselves, I could only withstand 15 chapters. I'm putting a triple as a support.

Are there really people who care about this? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

It’s so strange that people living in a world where physical condition does not equal strength still continue to think in these terms. On the other hand, an adventurer must be adventurous. ദ്ദി ̀ ᴗ ✧

lol, dude just threw up pictures of all the red-haired female characters he could remember.

A mediocre retelling of another author's work. Although I'm not sure that the user who uploaded this put even a little effort into it. Don't waste your time.

It feels like the author really doesn’t want to give the protoganist a humanoid form

Hang in there friend. No matter how hard it is, I am sure that everything will be fine. I'm looking forward to the continuation of this story.

Try learning how to write first, and then gradually increase the length of your chapters.