Nekoman
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Well first of all, I myself is not used with this writing style but I can see that its well written. Though the beginnig has a lot going on in just a few sentences that I was confused at first. I can't give any advice because I already forgot most of what a book needs to have but just a quick word, hope that the author improve (There's always room for imrpovement) and I hope this books gets a lot of reader and supporter
yea imagine they rap... you to reproduce hehehehe, wrong story sorry
Ah sorry, might have confused the names with my others books. Yea I'm improving :") Sorry if there are not many detail cause this book is actually rushed for a competition, you should drop it if you don't like it though
still the beginning lol, dun worry
why not lol
it's a small stream... It doesn't stay in one place, so it's pretty safe. And I to be honest don't know but yea
Yea right, just imagine some goblins you defeated some hundred years ago as your pets. Then kidnapping people from other world to create a rebellion
Well idk. I wrote about the MC. Maybe the goblin kidnapper tried to kidnap amother human before?
There will be gore in battle scenes as I felt it is necessary, beheading and heads on pikes and stuff. I would try to limit it though, as the novel is slow paced, meeting the new characters and finishing his missions until he did what he must.
sadly i'm not the writer of that lol
Uhh, well. He's a tactic guy, but in the battlefield. With the promise of being returned to his original world, it would make sense for him to save a race while trying a few fun in that world
lol, that might be a good idea