Muy desinteresado en mi entorno solo observó mí entorno como si fuesen libros que se escriben con las personas como simples títeres que cuelgan de sus hilos invisibles narrando una historia vacía
I'm liking the development of the story, it doesn't go very fast, the MC takes his time without rushing How the plot is going so far is excellent. It remains to be seen how it continues to develop.
The grammar needs improvement, the story progresses well but suddenly it begins to drop information one after another without allowing it to be understood
Confirm that the story is advancing in my opinion it is getting worse the last chapters are practically information and quick information And jump from one event to another as if nothing had happened
I would like you to at least put the link to the original story and give some credit to the original author in the synopsis Apart from that the story is interesting and it is a good choice of translation.