First; characters and settings are interesting, in-depth and well paced. From the four, I like the girl. Each character having their specialised and secretive backgrounds, skills and personality, plus some good dry humour. The plot is fascinating, dark, and unravelled just right. I would honestly pay to read this. Writing quality is excellent, and style 'sparse prose' is easy and fascinating to read.

Yes, yes, yessssssssssssssssssss, top-quality grooviness. more, more morreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, I want mooorrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Excellent, it's a great idea and well written fantasy. It has its period feeling through the writing and the world building is great. Can't decide which army I like best, as they're all very unusual and familiar with a difference.

Great action, lead female is written and developed well, feminine and experienced. Interested in the introduced kilt wearing space marine chapter too. Highly Recommenced

Hooked by this line alone ha.

You write beautiful prose, I loved how the banisher described the characters and the ending, exciting and mysterious. Thanks for the chapter.

First; characters and settings are interesting, in-depth and well paced. From the four, I like the girl. Each character having their specialised and secretive backgrounds, skills, and personality, plus some good dry humour. The plot is fascinating, dark, and unravelled just right. I would honestly pay to read this. Second; thank you for updating regularly, I've enjoyed and looked forward to continuing their mysterious journey. Third; writing quality is excellent, and style 'sparse prose' is easy and fascinating to read.

Loved the CQB. Hoping the new C does well.

Wow, like a game. I like the level ups, too many cool choices.

What the feck was that thing, cool, and nice to see another. Character dev is coming along well, so far so good. .

I love this girl. She's probably my favourite from the four, so far.

Intrigued, and curious to find out what that guy was.