Daoist814941

usual nonsense book that doesn't make sense doesn't have great grammar or pacing without any explanation. just whisks the reader into random situations. I dont expect greatness from a non English source of books but there are lots of helpful grammar sites like grammarly that HELP YOU FOR FREE. not worth it. hurts my head to read

35. "young". borrowed an egg. as far as I'm getting in this book

I have mixed feelings mostly bad. the trauma the mc is put through is highly unrealistic and doesn't show the actual feelings the mc would have after a given situation. he tries to aquire money through a book even though he can just take it? also, as the second most powerful force in the book, he seems quite unintimidating. small details would make ti much better

no vegetables. he would be dead of disease. unrealistic

ridiculous. what replaces pain is rage. he would do anything to make his tormentors suffer too

wish news was like that

me at the dmv

the main character is very dull. he gets distracted easily and even though he is given a golden opportunity the things he acts on make me want to pound my head into the ground. there is no planning, no patience, and no higher level thinking. what most books on this site seem to be

this book is fantastic so far. plz take mandated breaks tho now that it's premium. I've seen almost every story degrade in quality after they do. quality over quantity is what's important to any serious reader

not sure if it's the author that posted it but it's probably stolen from rr. over 150 chapters on rr so you don't have to waste your time on this site