Logician

Lv4

Get me the grammar - I’ll get you the reader.

2019-10-19 BergabungUnited Kingdom

328.8h

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Logician3 years ago
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if he had failed to neglect it, then he knew it all along?
Jyorta's eyes widened in surprise as he digested the details, feeling enlightened as thoughts exploded in his mind, causing him to understand a core detail that he had failed to neglect all along.
Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity
Fiksi Ilmiah · Overlord_Venus
Logician3 years ago
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self gain -> self-gain
Olpi leapt to her feet. Mana surged around her body as if reacting to the boiling sensation in her stomach. It snapped around her clenched fists. Alive. "I know your type. You people talk, but you're never the ones to pay the price. There is no greater good! You cannot weigh one good against another because it's the same thing. You've poisoned my friend and sold out his family for your own self gain!"
A Bored Lich
Fantasi · Random_writer
Logician3 years ago
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"flew crashed into a tree" is not proper English.
Paragraf ini telah dihapus.
A Bored Lich
Fantasi · Random_writer
Logician3 years ago
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Ground Control -} Ground Controller
And as the magenta spike absorbed the energy, she used three psychic arms to take out three Tier 3 Relics, condensing the Healing Salve using them. A Ground Controller worked in transporting all the Healing Salve to another Ground Control atop the walls.
Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity
Fiksi Ilmiah · Overlord_Venus
Logician3 years ago
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withing -} within
Paragraf ini telah dihapus.
Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity
Fiksi Ilmiah · Overlord_Venus
Logician3 years ago
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wave controlled -] wave controller
Rhachis Ancestor Strongest gazed at Vaika, nodding in praise, "You've grown stronger since I last saw you. When are you planning to become a Ground Controller? Haven't you reached the peak as a Wave Controlled a couple of years ago?"
Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity
Fiksi Ilmiah · Overlord_Venus
Logician3 years ago
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sentence makes no sense
Paragraf ini telah dihapus.
Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity
Fiksi Ilmiah · Overlord_Venus
Logician3 years ago
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central comment -> central command
"We had been collecting data regarding that and transmitting it to Central Comment at the end of every month. But this time, the irregularity didn't occur outside but happened within her." Havita Bone bowed her head even lower, sweating profusely as she felt the gaze of two Ancestors on her, "Her aura suddenly became alive, and for a moment, I felt it clearly…"
Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity
Fiksi Ilmiah · Overlord_Venus
Logician3 years ago
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Was that irony I heard there?
Frey, who had been listening to them talk for the past hour, finally spoke up. "You can still turn back. I won't judge you. It's only my baby nephew - the only family I have left in this world."
A Bored Lich
Fantasi · Random_writer
Logician3 years ago
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Isn't Havita a 'she'?
"That's pretty nice of you," Havita Bone said, motioning for him to sit beside him. She then pointed at the massive bone cocoon, "We've managed to contain the entity managing this aura personification. Now, the rest is for the Espers to figure out a method for us to leave this place."
Psychic Parasite: Final Serenity
Fiksi Ilmiah · Overlord_Venus