crazy_turkey18

is the system gonna converse again? seems like a right time to give insights oh wise one. hahaha

welcome back! just happy it wasn't abandonned

I agree, at this rate she definitely need therapy and some heart medicines from all these jump scares. Maybe throw in a lover just so she has someone to rant too.

*lair

Yay!!

this feels like a calm before a storm

oh i like this chapter. the death jackals being pretty talkative is interesting and there's some sort of introduction to who is with them. cool

ho ho, digging her way to her doom i see. can't wait for that bloodshed

Honestly, I think as a reader, I could probably feel the dwindling down. But nonetheless, a story that i still follow rather closely. It's good, and it has potential in it. I hope for a conclusion with the story, nothing rushed, a good end. You she come so far, and the change in pace that you needed is a good move. I think as an author you have been doing well. (: Keep it up!

yes author you better run. that last line.....