BlackHeart03

Oh. I think I know what you mean. If it's about the '[Insert Text Here', I tried to make the text written inside these ' ', to mirrow the closed personality, for a time it's Naoya, in other times, It's the protagonist cause' Naoya personality had won for a brief time. It's just a momentary thing, new body and soul change, all that. Sorry for the confusion! Thanks for letting me know!

This is kinda how he looks like, lol.

Nah, I'd write.

Well, most of the reviews are "right" to talk about how Spider-Man is "nerfed" and doesn't have his common strength which is normally 10/25 tons, but I want anyone who read the reviews before the fanfic itself, to have a little patience or not to guide so much by the reviews. The author is not stupid and these changes were made so that he can progress along with the System and can thus become stronger. The mentality of this fanfic (I think so, I'm not the author obviously) Is that it has the same idea as most cultivation stories, which is how the main character starts out weak and slowly rises in level/power until he can fight the heavyweights. (Well try to be as "objective" as possible) If you don't understand blame Google translator.

Oh no! What have you just do?! YOU CHANGED THE TIME SPACE WE ALL ARE GOING TO DIE AAAAA *The reality explotes*

I have to admit that the issue of not getting the spider's strength from being bitten by the spider was something that confused me for two seconds, but I understood that it was the author's intention to use the system and not relegate it directly to the spider's bite to level up/power up quickly (One can even blame the system for "sucking" the strength that came from the spider and using it to level up to version 0.2). Otherwise the fact that he doesn't have Spider's strength at the beginning is something (for me) that shouldn't prohibit you from enjoying a fanfic, since it's literally such a tiny thing that probably the author already thought about it and had like 20 contingency plans to level him up. (I'm sorry if you don't understand much of my text. Secondly, what I just wrote is totally from my point of view, but I'm posting it anyway xd)

Oh boy yeah.

(Personal opinion) I'm honestly not a fan of the Harem, as I see it as unlikely to work and generally full of clichés and doesn't let the heroines shine on their own. But honestly, the Fanfic is so much fun to read that I have the luxury of breaking one of my main rules of never reading Fanfic with Harem. (Sorry if you can't understand it very well. Google Translator is not perfect)

Well, the issue of the secret identity being "revealed" since he doesn't wear a mask is both right and somewhat wrong. First, well because it is the author's story and he can do whatever he wants as long as he applies it in a coherent way with the story. And the reason it's "wrong" is that he's still a teenager with friends and family who don't have powers or aren't always in Peter's sight. If Peter were to gain a mortal enemy, he would not hesitate to kidnap the hero's friends and even kill them, turn them into slaves, and so on. That's the main reason Spider-Man wears a mask when he goes to fight crime, he doesn't want his family/friends to get hurt because of his decision to protect the innocent. One of the most well known examples would be when Spider-Man reveals his identity for the Civil War comics and his family is attacked (specifically Aunt May) who gets hurt and "killed" until Spider-Man makes a deal with Mephisto and well we all know what happens. Another reason is the complaints that common criminals will file after Spider-Man stops them with a lot of "violence" (AKA using a web) And by the time Peter gets a complaint he will have to go to court, go to jail and so on multiple times (This example is directly taken from Batman Knight where at the end of the game Batman's identity is discovered and how 20% of the lines after that event talk about how they will leave Bruce Wayne poorer than a grape). Obviously, the author had to have thought of all this, since he is not stupid. But I still find it a bit controversial that you left the hero without a mask. (Sorry if this """"critic"""" is aggressive or has no sense. The Google translator is not totally perfect.)