VisualKoFey

I'm sorry but I went the slow way and he has changed after the current events up until the last chapter I released today. I tried to make it to be a bit relistic but it ended up being a little bit drawn out.

Thank you. I appreciate your help. I fixed the error, and I don't have an editor. I use Grammarly for spelling mistakes and stuff like that. It didn't show as an error, so I thought it was fine. English isn't my primary language.

I made the MC as a growth-type character with two powers. A mysterious hero power and a boost-type mutation power. The more he experiences and connections he makes, the stronger he becomes.

You are correct, but I am showing the story of the MC in the new world and not if or went he goes back to Earth with the book now working differently after Kevin, the writer of the book dies. The MC might appearance a change in the time difference in both worlds. I hope this can help you understand from my perspective of the storytelling.

I read eight chapters but I can say that this is a great story of witches showing the past to the next generation witch to take revenge for them. However, they forget that the MC isn't a tool, but a living being. The story has a great potential, keep it up.

Oh he will.

All he knows is that he should be able to transfer back after a hundred years and that the book doesn't say what happens after that. But he is forgetting how the book is also working differently as well since he was summoned earlier than those before him.

The story has a good start with all the details needed to help the reader understand what is happening and what her personality is like. The writing is good, well placed, and easy to read. I recommend anyone stumbling on this story to give it a go.

I read a few chapters and I say it has a good start. The two characters have a good synergy yet they feel far and different enough to learn something from each other. I recommend this and hope the best it can evolve into a fantastic story. Keep it up.

A good start so far. I hope the story can focus more on what the MC is doing as it can help readers understand better what is happening around the MC, but other than that, the story makes you want to know what is going to happen next. Overall, I recommend anyone finding this story to take their time and give this story a go.