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LucasTrauman10dBerkomentarbro giving Escanor vibes
I don't know why he tries to be so humble or if he truly is this humble. He has all the reason to be arrogant and proud ... But I can sense a deep pride in him. It was the reason he didn't fall for the provocations and jests from Andros. He told me everything about it and I have to say I am impressed. Andros tried to belittle him and said Robert was an idiot who took the insults about himself. But I can see the truth of the matter.- LucasTrauman17dBerkomentar
I wish you good luck and god speed, and if you wanted too you can maybe write there on paper and just copy it with one of those mobile scanning apps. You'd be releasing chapters in blocks so you wouldn't really get much useful feedback from us that way but you still get to continue writing if thats what you want, and we get to continue reading.
Ch 18 A/n: Important. - LucasTrauman20dBerkomentar
While many fanfictions mostly deal with the same characters and places as the story they are placed in I find the ones that explore the things mentioned off hand in the story more interesting so i would suggest writing something having to do with the the other continent we don't really explore, and underground (i haven't read the second book yet so this may have changed). The underground is mentioned in the story as a deep corruption that even the gods avoid so i think a pathway that thrives in the underground like the Abyss pathway would be interesting. With it's main powers like something along the lines of earth manipulation, super strength, and an affinity with wealth and creation. I can see the 9th sequence being something like Miner giving the beyonder a strong body, the ability to find weaknesses in stone and dirt, night vision, and proficiency in tools. With later sequences being things like Gemologist, Forge Master, and Earth Whisperer giving powers to inspect and make items, control earth, etc... These are just examples I came up with on the spot and aren't very detailed but i think it would be cool.
A/N: I am currently thinking about making a LOTM fanfic with an original Sequence Pathway, a transmigrator main character (no story knowledge), and a system. If you have any suggestions, what are they? - LucasTrauman25dBalas Habutheri
You know despite being on this app for a while I always though people were just being mean when they called other reviewers bots because I said the same stuff. Like most of my reviews just say "good," with 5 stars but then after seeing this I was like "you know what I'm going to check," and there are in fact bots with no reading time and only reviews. I never actually thought that was a thing for reviews just things like chat bots on Twitch.
- LucasTrauman27dBerkomentar[→ BlondiePitch: OOOOOOOOOMAAAAAGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD!]
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big yikes, hope you are doing okay
Sorry for not updating Monday, people. This... Has not been a good week. I had a relative k*ll themselves, no easy way to put it. I wasn't very close to the person, but they left two daughtes below 10 which I care for very much. - LucasTrauman1mthBerkomentarThat was the result of very hard work on both of our parts. Trying to convey to a gyarados how to make rain by dancing was a sight that was kind of embarrassing.
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Kinda bad all things considered as it's often shown weapon and armor memories are a major part of a persons power. Sunny is an especially great example seeing how he literally couldn't beat his current nightmare without his sword and how his armor literally stopped him from dying like twice. This also means that Raian is going to be using a lot of charms
Flaw description: You possess an admirable sense of pride that precludes the use of weaponry and armor., for a Warrior of Will no weapon is greater than their will, for a Warrior of Will no armor is greater than their will. You cannot use weapons and armor] - LucasTrauman1mthBerkomentar
bit of a dig at sunny there
"It's because I was born during a heavy rain." Raian continued the conversation because he felt like sleeping the moment, he stopped doing something "I heard my mother was an aloof person who almost named me Rain, hahaha that would have been a really weird name." - LucasTrauman1mthBerkomentar
Don't you dare go hallow!
Don't you dare go hollow! - LucasTrauman1mthBerkomentar
I think you can be proud to say that this is one of the best first stories someone has made in a while. Many who are first starting out make absolute garbage so well done.
Overall, I am pleased with what I created for my first story. Rapturous Rhapsody may not be perfect, but it is mine. - LucasTrauman1mthBerkomentar
Lies once more, at least an 8 out of 10 compared to all other books. This story has a lot of depth, and well thought out planning which many other books do not.
As a story (compared to published works): 5 out of 10. - LucasTrauman1mthBerkomentar
lies again, at least a 9 out of 10 as it is among the best that i have ever read. Look at my account I've read many.
As a fanfiction: 7 out of 10 - LucasTrauman1mthBerkomentar
lies, 10 out of 10 seeing as it's the best ever made
As a story based on the Waifu Catalogue, 9 out of 10 - LucasTrauman1mthBerkomentar
I'm glad you stood by it. It felt new, and unique.
Still, looking back, I stand by it. Not only because I do think it gave me a better grasp of the 'waifus' and practice writing their characters, but also because I still think too much of fanfiction, especially self-insert fanfiction, is simply a repeat of canon events. - LucasTrauman2mthBerkomentarParagraf ini telah dihapus.
- LucasTrauman2mthBerkomentarCh 105 Announcement