Curently writing Guropeji. If you enjoy the story please support by voting :D
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That was a good comparison though I haven't watched it. Looks like a nice show! Reminded me of Battle Royale
Thanks for the comments and of course for reading :) haha yeah it could be quite gruesome. Hope you enjoy reading it!
Brutal scene ahead. If you want to skip, find 'the video ended there' paragraph below.
Gruesome scene incoming. If you want to skip, find the 'the video ended there' section
An enjoyable first chapter. Good dialogue, interesting story and easy to understand. The long chapter was unexpected because of the short prologue.
Other than some punctuation misses, the story is easy enough to follow. The first person POV brings us closer to the MC. Keep on the good work!
Good first chapter. Easy to read. Nice story. Keep up the good work! [img=recommend]
Some writing & punctuation mistakes but a good start nonetheless
Other than some writing mistakes, overall this is a well-written story. The cultivation is unique and not cliches. Boy, the first chapter is huge (and full on action!) but I guess it is necessary to set up the background story. Overall, I really enjoy it. Looking forward to reading it more!