Mayline

This encounter was over the top and quite the abrupt stop from the fight Also I find him a little slow-brained for a number person

Ah nevermind 8 meteors and 9 elements?

not dark ? woat!

That's suspicious

Oh boy isn't it relieving

We can read his thoughts out loud at any time, but I don't understand the need to have a guard in front of a school

There is no whatsoever harem in this novel

Not really, 1AM and I spent time on each other's novel to point out mistakes and points other things out, I was thanking his patience and clarity

I believe you need to focus on one tense for your storytelling. Some phrases are grammarily incorrect because of that. also you have a lot of capital letters everywhere, it does not respect the ponctuation. It saddens me because your first chapter is overall poetic and extremely heavy to read, it's a great job

using blood as ink is very emo like also using blood to draw anything makes it stink really hard