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Lord_Meph1sto10dBerkomentarNext cliche! Fighting some dumb mercenary when he comes to guild
"Is that what your mom said to you when you were born? Ugly bastard..." Sol said, turning toward the lady behind the counter and ignoring the foul-looking guy.- Lord_Meph1sto10dBerkomentar
whats interesting? Atleast explain it before continuing with this dumb cliche
"He's definitely interesting. I wasn't wrong about that." He mumbled under his breath, turning around and walking the opposite way. - Lord_Meph1sto10dBerkomentar
Could it be anymore cringe
'Is he actually asking what my name is right now? And... did he just compliment me? These things... they have never happened before.' Sol thought to himself, quite surprised by this Kennan character. - Lord_Meph1sto10dBerkomentarCh 3 Half Prologue III Vanathril Academy
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BS!! How do u think the story progressed so far without him inviting trouble???
Sky Scar gave a bitter smile in his heart. The knowledge of Supernatural powers indeed cannot be inferred by common sense. He nodded and said, "Don't worry, even though my strength is not strong, I am not the type of person who likes to cause troubles. I will never summon you unless it's absolutely necessary." - Lord_Meph1sto2mthBalas LonelyDuo
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green requires will right?
Scar covered her face, her pupils trembling with deep fear. Her Green Lantern ring began to manifest the most powerful, terrifying, and despair-inducing creature she could imagine. - Lord_Meph1sto3mthBerkomentar
whats so mysterious in washing hands?
The middle-aged bartender who made the Passionate Flame was taken aback at first, then his surprise turned into solemnity and seriousness. As a bartender, one must be entirely focused and respect the drink one is preparing, a mark of respect to customers and oneself. He saw a glint of reverence in the young beggar's eyes. Clearly, the beggar was not paying any attention to the discussions going on around him and was fully focused on the drink he was about to prepare. Even for the middle-aged bartender, such concentration was not easy to achieve without deliberate effort, but it seemed so natural for this 11- or 12-year-old beggar. His washing process was seamless, as if he did it every day, and the fanaticism and dedication in his eyes when looking at the alcohol bottles were undeniably real. The middle-aged bartender felt that the devil was in the details and had gleaned much from observing the beggar's washing process. - Lord_Meph1sto3mthBerkomentar
bro whats with the long paragraphs? keep it short. Honestly the mc feels like a chatterbox now
"Pleasure to meet you, Mai. Sorry, I don't know any other way to address you, so I'll stick with this for now. If you don't like it, let me know. Ty Lee is right, I'm joining you. However, Azula didn't lose to me. It was more like she just didn't expect that much initiative from me, so it was nothing more than a mishap." - Lord_Meph1sto3mthBalas AspiringPedo
tf is ur username bro
"Well, what happened next... we were born in that village. I remember our father. I had a good memory from childhood, but I can't recall my brother's face. He went off to war. He was a war fanatic, always seeing injustice everywhere and so on. Our mother raised us. When I first, feeling thirsty, drew a few drops of water towards me..." - Lord_Meph1sto3mthBalas Fr1day_
nigato
The terror of this moment etched itself into his heart, and he could hardly believe it. - Lord_Meph1sto6mthDiterbitkan
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bro get grammerly or sm app, correct all the spelling mistakes, use proper punctuation and construct sentences in a proper way. Your cover and synopsis are filled with spelling mistakes. I feel like u have an all round idea for the story but your english is holding u back.Put some effort into it and try to improve. Best wishes.
Ch -2 PLOT INFORMATION - Lord_Meph1sto6mthBerkomentar
Goosebumps!!
Third Agreement: Equal to Heaven! - Lord_Meph1sto9mthBalas Arthur_Bosta
this info narrows down the suspect list and if someone like batman got wind of it then, its only a matter of time before he got exposed.
"Why am I attacking you? Didn't you hear what I said earlier? You wrecked my transportation and now you need to pay up!" replied Yuri, getting angry. - Lord_Meph1sto9mthBerkomentar
tf
Someone touched feces and obtained the superpower to fuse with feces and strengthen themselves! - Lord_Meph1sto10mthBalas Night_Crawler619