Prognastat

The tail would literally be an indication of a kekkai genkai to the people in the Naruto world. There isn't some kind of special medical test they have everyone take to determine if something is a valid kekkai genkai... It's literally just people with abnormal physiques/abilities that can't be replicated by others. Not all of them are all that beneficial to the person that has it. This is literally what his tail would be even if the rest of his body was perfectly normal.

This novel has gone from barely passable to utter trash. Why the new universe along with a nerf losing most of what he worked over half a century on?

This novel is good at making the wrong decision on how to progress the story at every step.

This is starting to get too retarded

Him repeatedly getting so drunk he blacks out and doesn’t remember how he ends up in bed with women isn’t really funny, but comes across as more pathetic.

Why? He should after the many betrayals. Why must he be such a simp?

He has nerfed gamer mind. Though it doesn’t keep him calm from what I understood didn’t it block mental interference such as this enslavement?

Yeah now the Cullens aren’t involved anymore. The MC isn’t a Twilight vampire anymore. The vampires around him aren’t either. His allies arent anyone or anything from Twilight canon and the enemies don’t seem to be either… At this point nothing is linking this to being a Twilight fanfic anymore.

So in a single group they have one with the ability to know her sister died and exactly where she was. Another to see exactly what happened and finally another that just happens to be able to track his mate from a single hair. This is way too forced to create drama/conflict.

This chapter is a mess. Way too many far too long paragraphs and also way too much detail being described. It’s practically unreadable due to these issues.