Lord_Pendragon

hmmm shameless author review? my overall rating isn't all that high since I'm currently unaware of my own writing capabilities. like it's been super long so what I'll do is make a new review everytime I feel as though I've grown. currently? it's definitely not the best story but hey, it's one i made after thinking a lot so I'm pretty confident. well at least I hope so. world building consumed a lot of my time so i think it's fair if i rate at least that as a 5.

any new novels?

who's ja sun

u okay?

what's your next work?

can't blame him, I'm not about to die over a stupid battle either

lol, nthn wrong with her pleasuring herself. especially since she's not in a relationship

personally I think it's better this way right now, otherwise a lot of what he wants to do and has done so far wouldn't have been even remotely possible. also, it adds to character depth

imp? what's that

are you not used to writing from another characters pov? It doesn't really detract from the story heck i could even be overthinking it, Riel's internal thoughts and monologues feel more natural. for the mom and a few other times for other povs, its's kinda hard to explain but like even though its in 1st person it almost feels a bit too objective like it's a 3rd person observation and they're not the concerned party. man I'm bad at this. basically even though she's talking about the situation that just happened and the state of her body, it almost feels like it's not her. she felt more like a person from Riels's pov. Also, thanks for the chapter, ik writing can be pretty difficult and taxing, especially considering your releases are free.