Nevren

Mc is a whining emo coward. Even though he was an assassin in his previous life he acts nothing like it.he acts like a blushing vigin in front of pretty girls whines and complains whenever things get difficult and never stops harping about how his family was killed. He's like Sasuke 10x

Like he said, as an Uchiha his emotions are magnified many times more than in his previous life.

You can't just have your characters shout their emotions.

MC:

Over dramatic useless MC with a boring story and no originality. Over dramatic useless MC with a boring story and no originality.

MC: