The mc seems to be the result of mixing a face slapping young master into the body of a near homeless peasent and then the homeless dude try’s to act like he’s all that but he has no powers and disregards his system. Until the chapters get locked it’s a story about a mentally deficient bum trying to become a villain but failing. Has potential I’d he’d probably become interesting around chapter 90-100.

It’ a good fan fic that’s well worth a read. Good good good goood goddd goood good good good good good good good goood goood good good good

Don’t like the mc and main girl as they are very fake and face slapping bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad badDon’t like the mc and main girl as they are very fake and face slapping bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad

Broken English story dosent make sense and reviews are bots so as low as I can go for me. I couldn’t even tell what this story was about from the synopsis or the chapters.

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I guess they thought hmmm people don’t like eastern translations let’s use a more western one and then spliced a run of the mill Wuxia novel that has face slapping, overthrowing the ones who hated you when you were weak and other face slapping themes with Greek mythology

Sure, a better version would be “sorry for being late Miss Rosa, a girl pushed me and I couldn’t get to the train in time.

Me now banned from stealing

The translation quality could of course be better but compared to others it is great and it has been so so long since I have found a trial read story that I enjoy definitely give it a glance.

This is a pretty good story and has a very light and Happy undertone to it. It is basically about a very strong guy whose Trying to make his way in potion selling. The only problems I have with it are the mc is way too passive and I get that it is his character but he sucks as a salesman. He can’t Negotiate At all and just gives massive discounts at random which puts me off. And the story has some bad grammar that could be fixed buy run ing it through grammarly.

Very good but as mentioned by the author very slow like skip the first 8 or 9 chapters and you wont miss anything Slow but it is looking promising.

Bad writing

Translation gets better and better

Very bland and standard Chinese mc where he randomly jumps from a normal isakied person to a cold and ruethless mc who is fine with killing. the only saving grace For this story is the dragon ranch system which is a neat concept but makes the mc overpowered in a badway as it has no flow or natural feel to it.

Mouth?

Did you steal my fortnite car?¿

ThIs Was how the first Italian Was made

I read this before he came back to it and loved the concept but was very sad when it ended abruptly. And scrolling randomly i find this with 60+ chaps and I cant belive it. very good aloen story

Pretty good but already showing tHe signs of futUre problems Such as forgetting about bringing rebar to the apocalypse and then saying he cant being things to the apocalypse

Lol i can tell this books gonna be great as the author forgot about the rebar already