not my cup of tea. ........................

For now, I'm limiting it to powers he had in Smallville. I intend to have J'onn develop or display such abilities after Smallville events when Clark becomes superman

aw you dont like it? im sad T_T

is this dropped?

As a long time Spidey fan and cosplayer, I am deeply enjoying this story. Also the author is pretty good with making the main character humorous with quips. I so envy the author. As a newbie fic writer myself, I can only WISH I was able to write humor like this as well.

since he knows this from his past life, isn't he wasting a perfect with then? like maybe getting a room full of senzu beans instead or something?

i thought the snake was nagini? why is it nagaina ?

I do have quite a lot of ideas i wanna include but this is a rather slow progress for now. There's too many events happening at the moment that the mc wants to interfere in. Maybe when I reach that point where there were mostly fillers in the smallville timeline and would not be squeezed out by flash or nolan trilogy events.

thank you for the kind words. while I am not actively trying to make the MC actually good, I try to keep him in that side somewhat in the context of not screwing up the future or his survival. The worst I intend to have with him so far is up to 'indulging' in his desires but not outright evil. I wouldn't want my MC to dip into that dark side. Glad you are enjoying it so far.

the pov change without indication of who is speaking is hurting my head

i made it to be A post spiderman venom but the sentience is replaced completely by my main character

I made this to be a mix of nolan trilogy, smallville and a variant of flash cw

entertaining so far but im quite confused why the main character started talking and thinking like raditz and talking as if he actually lived raditz experiences when in truth he merely took over his body after being beaten

While im interested in the story so far and continuously reading it at the moment, I am very upset that the author makes it annoying to determine who the fuck is talking and whos pov. Since it switches POV, the "I" or "me" becomes confusing since he doesnt indicate who the fuck is the speaker at the beginning.

MC actually makes a wish to be in a db universe implying he was a fan or at least liked the show. But goes ahead and disrespects everyone like korin or other characters instead of being friendly. calls everyone an asshole but he himself is the asshole. MC is absolutely not likable. If author wanted this to be a dark mc or antihero or villain, he could have made mc not wish to be there but forcefully brought to that universe instead

is this dropped?

always have, always will be lol

Interested so far. But I have to say, I think the author changed Superman fundamentally. Particularly the first time MC met him. After resolving the initial misunderstanding and healing Hal, Superman punches him? really? later on also includes scenes where it doesn't make sense for superman to do that or out of character. Either the author changed him a bit intentionally or didn't truly understand how clark thinks. But beyond that, so far im still interested how this will go

I dont understand the point of all this. If the Main character had not interfered, everything would have already been resolved anyway. The point of most MCU fanfics is to make either a better ending or increase their own survival. But the author made the MC spill all the beans therefore eliminating their advantage of future knowledge and also endangering everyone. Its like, if the MC simply moved out of the USA, theyd have been safe from all that shit. He could have only interfered if it was close to the thanos snap

This actually made me think as well. But then I'd have to change the title into something else if I do. Because then he wouldn't be bruce anymore. While that's probably fine and all, I don't see an option to change the title of the fanfic itself. So at this point Im not sure yet. Another way I can go about it is if I make batman the main host and maybe swap temporarily to others for a certain period of time.