A really good fanfic which is really hard to find especially in this website. I love how you protray characters so well especially kiyotaka. Really loving the story so far.

Really love this fanfic Waiting to see further capabilities of the system and how naruto benefits from these cheats..... The grammar is top notch and the interaction between characters is good..... Let's just hope it will get past ch 20

This guy is too op

I think its from fanfiction dot net and He/she marries Roshi That old guy with four tails and even has a daughter or son i think. sorry for the major spoiler

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Well most of the xianxia novels I've read has this kind of line so.........

"Struggling is futile, just dig out the Sharingan by yourself and hand it over, if you do so, I might consider letting you leave here alive, after all, pointlessly dying is meaningless, don't you think?" Wow Young master Line is finally here....

The story is nice and I'm not gonna lie I hate the fact that some of the fairy tail members have become devil but what can I do about it sigh 😔 So its me being stingy by not giving this fanfic 5 stars

Do you even know what fanfic is if you want the same thing as Canon then just watch the anime man.... The different servants and their interactions with the characters are done perfectly. I don't even know what you're complaining about in this story... This fanfic is one of the best I've read in this site

Nice work there but can't say i like the fact issei just agreed to be under a slave contract just like that anyways good work it's a fun read.....

Never thought of this in that way 🤔 but yeah it's like you said thanks the information btw

Will others find about the Cultivation technique if so then can't say I like the idea here...

So how strong is ichigo actually??? In my opinion he is stronger that great red and ophis combined.. bleach characters are all overpowered...

The story is progressing nicely. Conversations feels a bit off but that can be improved as the story progresses and i love yuri.....😇😇. AND PLEASE DON'T ABANDON THE STORY.......

Lol man I don't know what I did to offend you it's just that I love Gender bender novels.. And man if I were to transfer into a women I would go full yuri.. Just because I love gender bender doesn't mean I love guys and i just said that I'm okay with mc having *** with another men...

Aww finally retribution I have been waiting for it like forever

Well it's just a novel and no I'm perfectly normal and I like girls like a normal man should. It's not like I have to be gay to like something like gender Bender novels

Just a random reviewer giving ratings for this awesome fanfiction ... This story is awesome and I love every bit of it......... LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

Damn if she keeps acting like that I'm quitting this novel

This story is awesome very well written and nice progression of the character............................................... This story is absolutely awesome............................................... I love it...................................................