A Veteran Novel Reader, Perfectionist and The Bane of all Authors. I will call out every single grammar mistake, so beware.
membaca
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Membaca buku-buku
that's not cowardice
hmm he might not be actual child of that family but an orphan adopted.. that would explain why the father doesn't teach as it is only taught to the bloodline
lvl*
bro what?
it can speak?
in this case he should be also emotional for the parents that died
maybe use "from the predecessor" (idk how to write that word" as the training wasn't from his past life
why not just call it earth..
olay i know it's a game world but this breaks the immersion while reading.. you could just say "they are dharma cultivators"
should be Realm