William_Stewart

You were literally talking about not going with the flow....

L take

He gets betrayed by Robin and then easily forgives her without a punishment at all.One comment or said it's like if your girlfriend cheats on you and suddenly comes back after your a rich business man. Saying she only cheated on you to encourage you to work hard. Honestly if you look past that, it's not bad, I just felt like complaining today .

"It's Allright " He said, with his words containing a tinge of deceit and appreciation. Not wishing to anger the masses with his opinion, he opted for the more reliable of results.

No offense but females can't write harem novels. You make it too dramatic/ tragedy like.

He lusts

I feel you man, there will always be someone unhappy. Just try your best to write a story you enjoy.

Stolen without even crediting the real Author.

This is a good review. I felt the same when I read the first chapter, just seemed like a lackluster summary of words.

I personally prefer B, but to each their own.