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It's a pretty important topic but this is just a web novel, no need to get so worked up lol.
*earrape noises*
New teammate discovered!
I have, it doesn't drag things out like this.
"Side-Quest Acquired!"
Guys remember how he talked about focusing the power of ember? It probably turned into a new move because of that
This is... oddly relatable.
It flipped a switch*
Bub is similar to dude so maybe this and a few other sentences like this would be better if you replaced bub with son.
EXACTLY THIS!