Nice Story. Keep it on Library. I think MC has a potential to be Good Neutral Character. I just hope MC not so Over Power and MC can death if he make mistake in battle. Background story for MC with another Character is good, they (MC and His Friend) still think and act like toddler, its a good Point for me. Really i just hope MC is not so OP because it will ruin MC friendship and MC background. at least i hope MC friend can keep up with MC in term Battle Power.

Uwogghh! Ruby Route is very interesting! What a wholesome story. But problem-solving between Ruby & Weiss kind rush, i think they will have big fight (only my imagination to make storyline more wide, don't mind it).

Yes. I think its storyline still good. I'am.. just sad can't read again Var vs Oezelia. Thanks for explanation.

Huhuhu... Chapter 51,52,53 already deleted😭.Why?

Done. But i drop it half-way.

Novel Extra Nobody by Alfir. i don't know its suit with you taste, because its No-Harem Sect.

Thanks. i hope you not discourage to write again because this review. I already read many Novel Extra fanfic. And i know many of Novel Extra fanfic is drop, because author put too many Buff to their MC, and have Flawless Personality, so story arc in Canon Novel Extra become short because MC can easy solve Canon Novel Extra Conflict. And they don't know how to put Good Filler Chapter outside from Novel Extra Storyline. That why Perfect MC + Flawless MC always boring and not attract anything (except, you can write Canon Female Lead with interesting Personality, and have good compability with your MC)

I just want write review. This fanfic Will have Boring Phase. Your MC already Invincible (Immortality from Ajin), has knowledge about future plot, and good looking. If you put Calm Protagonist Template to your MC, this MC already Perfect Human. He don't need Character Development except training, because he already has Perfect Personality. Its Will boring story for me. Atleast you must put some weakness to MC, so he will know learning from mistake or something.

You must know many Korea LN is has : Good Start > Repeating Mid Arc > Bad Ending Conclusion.

CorrupTobi

Thank You for the Chapter. I really love Ruby in this story😍

Hahaha... It's true. Very common nowdays Fanfic and Light Novel. For convenience make storyline and plot armor

Thank You Very Much. I hope you always healthy and can have time to write this fanfic until end. If Ending haven't decided. I really hope you can make Single Route, and Harem Route. Thank you for your hard work. Good to read this fanfic/original story.

Yeah. My regret is i don't read it before you Reupload. its already 100 chapter😭

You do a good job. Really, this is perfect story for me. Even you use Anime Character as template, i know its for reader can imagine how your Character expression they personality, its completely different from any Fanfic Story. Each Character have unique personality, and contrast each other. And what i love about this story, all Main Character or Side Character is not perfect, they complement each other. Even Story Development progress with good Narative each Chapter. I don't know how to explain it anymore. For me this really Good Story and Good Character. I can't have opinion for Writing Quality/Update/World Background, its not my speciality.

He don't want Fame.

Thank You. i just hope, MC don't steal all Xiao Yan's Women

bruh really? what different read original novel with Fanfic if you inside Protagonist Body? We here to see how your Original Character develop and have interaction Protagonist. Not Copy Cat with only slight different from Original.

bruh really? what different read original novel with Fanfic if you inside Protagonist Body? We here to see how your Original Character develop and have interaction Protagonist. Not Copy Cat with only slight different with Original

MC just become battle junky after get rid his trauma... hah... another one drop. Good at Opening, Bad at Ending