ShiroN3K0
Avid reader of Fantasy, Adventure, Action and so on, enjoy reading Xianxia/Wuxia and all in between, want to get to writing a novel i can be proud of, motivation gets in the way a lot though.
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Membaca buku-buku
Thanks for the feedback, I agree that the pacing is a bit slow I've been trying to fight the 'Asspull' feeling by slowly developing the MC but unfortunately making that interesting at the same time is a bit hard. We'll that's why I'm writing to improve I guess.
Ah I changed it a little whole back to make more sense, I missed this instance will update it soon.
Sorry I hadn't updated it to a the better ranking system, done now.
His Azure flame is his normal Qi, I did want to make the flame dual coloured but couldn't get a good result and my editing skills aren't quite good enough, I will definitely look in to getting a proper cover drawn in the future though.
Well I won't say much because of spoilers but... that's not quite right.
fixed
[img=In a daze] Strange I fixed it in inkstone but it hasn't updated here.
It was my brain keeps inserting unnnecessary words lol
fixed
My mistake, will fix
It's the second to last 'Mortal' stage, the 9th stage is unique, will be detailed more on the coming arcs
Until they can handle the responsibilities and position of core disciple without help from others, basically just getting used to it.
He was talking about Metal and Earth here, but I forgot to make that clear. Thanks for your other comments will go through and fix stuff later.