jaro_onody

its not bad but mercing ciltivators consect with the gamer is abit pointless why does the mc need to unlock chackra when he already has a chakra stat and regen stat. second why you putting hiruzen eyes on him what the point .this consept has already been used. like 90% of all chinees naruto fics do this .to me this souds so stupid why would a hokage be warry off a child being a spy. his father was shinobi. beside you given to much perception to hiruzen orochimaru killled dozen children for his expeiments right onder his nose , lets not speak about danzo.

the game lettery created the vesel and its origin add ramdom. why do the autors always uses this trop its overused and kind of stupid ,you just ading guld that shouldn't be there.

story is inconsitent be it the leveling system or the mc character. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

he killed 500 merceneries only leveld to 3, killed 1minibos leveld up to 7. doest make sens but oke

im surprised, this story is fire..................................................................................................................................

the more i read the more i thinks that its the author himself who is 6 years old child .not given it a bad review but im skipping this story .i have seen 5years old naruto mc who where more mature then this. a bit of a disappointment ,it started good

the story is really undefined , like who is the mc is it madara or isakai mc -this one bothers me the most he reconniced that it harry potter universe but doest realy have any knowledge about it , author ignores this entry

intresting story , but the there are a lot of thing that dont realy make sense in the story by it bye adding jutsus that he never learend or mentiont before or him surviving a jutsu from a jonin , has low chunning level of chackra but he (kind off) spams justus like its noting i understand that this is not gamer fic but you could at least mention the progress off his power... also you describtion off orochimaru is wricked --- i love it

a boring story , .......................................................................................................................................

he is so overpowerd now