StrangeLoopSleuth

Surprisingly good overall, once you get passed the first few chapters. While it starts out as a typical overpowered protagonist who is handed everything, it quickly changes pace and becomes one of the better harem stories, actually building relationships over time and letting each woman play a unique and important role in the group rather than just being collectables. The Hogwarts arc is really well done, despite a few plot holes, but it feels like the author ran out of patience and started forcefully growing the harem after that. It went from slow introduction of new members finding their place and integrating with the group into a mass grab of new members with little time or attention spend on integrating them. The only real issue is the power scaling between worlds is odd, but that is mainly due to genre differences rather than the fault of the author.

To be honest I'm only leaving this review because others are spamming 1 star reviews due to "Yuri" which is incredibly dumb. They are literally complaining about girls making out during a threesome... frankly everyone has their own lines for what is acceptable in a relationship, but the sheer insecurity necessary for *that* to be the deal breaker in a harem fantasy is just sad. The premise is good, but the story itself is meh and suffers from the same bland protagonist as like 80% of the harem stories on this site.

for a fic like this that mostly depends on if you can keep consistent output. if so, then posting 5ish chapters ahead for $1-3 / month could do pretty well. don't bother with multiple tiers even if you choose a higher price or more chapters in advance. if you want to go that route, build up the advance chapters over time and launch it in a couple weeks to avoid disruption

lol

The premise and initial kingdom building aspects are really good, but it substantially devolves in quality in later chapters. The blatant racism is at least somewhat excusable early on due to the setting/time period but instead of settling down and fading into the background it just keeps ramping up. This is essentially a kingdom building novel where the development aspects are interesting and well handled that is handicapped by the original authors own biases and shifting focus.

Excellent fic! Very well done character development and world building diving deep into lore without being afraid to completely derail 'canon' events. Definitely my favorite cyberpunk fic

This story has frankly been borderline up until now, but I think this chapter places it firmly in bad territory.

all according to keikaku

pathetic effort overall