Abraham_ABOG6571

I think this novel is great especially as a beginner but has you read more novels it becomes pretty bad as you begin to see more flaws for example you be in this novel you can see the main character not being able to realize how lucky he has been because he is like almost died three times in like a hundred chapters which is like pretty short after getting crippled and facing death. I know there is development. but I felt like he needed more reflection early on.

I think your novel is great for being your first work. I'm still in the early chapters 160/810 so I can't say much but I wished that the novel went a bit earlier into Damien's emotional recovery the hypocrisy was too much.

it was really good but I hated the ending. It was a good story. I felt that it became a different genre at the end. so although I liked a lot of it in the end I didn't like the ending

the main character is childish and doesn't think things through so no

Although I shit on the writing its because the writer has a hard time with the pronouns and who is male female or which character he is talking about.if he fixes is the best novel ever

guy gets the words right. The novel is good and really funny. but there are problems with the wording. review the entire novel and fix it. it would boost ur novel a lot more

it was something worth reading. it wasn't regular. it showed the personality also maturity and so much more. i really want to see it reach a 1000chapters