ShinSoma

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A Chef, good at cooking, and a big anime, manga, and games fan. An avid reader of books, manga comics, and cookbooks. I have always wanted to write books about fantasy.

2019-05-04 BergabungPhilippines

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Momen

ShinSoma2 years ago
Balas HalfX
Ooooh! Okay. I'll do that next chapter.
The softest chirping of birds echoed through the tiny window, while the sun shone through the tiny slits in the wood that lit up the musty room. A rusty cot had been placed in the right corner of the room while a table with a stool sat on the left, and next to the cot was a broken nightstand. The contents on top of the nightstand were only a small mirror and a candlestick. A nub remained of a white candle that had burned through the night. Wax coated the smallholder and dripped onto the ground leaving dried wax that seemed to outstretch the candle but would never reach home again. A makeshift rug had been made with strips of fabric that once had been a blanket. The makeshift rug had been placed in the center of the room, a barrier between the freezing stone flooring and one's feet. On top of the table was a small bowl filled with water either for drinking or bathing while a wooden hairbrush sat next to the bowl. Another candle had been placed on this table, the candle far less used than the nub that remained of the other. Towards the table on the right sat on the ground a small chest that contained clothes, toiletries, and any other item the small vixen was able to procure, which was not much. She had scrounged everything she owned, grateful that they now seemed to ignore her unless their anger got the better of them. No longer used as a dog's chew toy she had earned her role. After the brutal death of the previous caretaker, she was granted the role of caretaker of the residence, but to a home that did not want her.
Master and Fox: A Tale of Forbidden Love, War, Honor, and Duty
Fantasi · ShinSoma
ShinSoma2 years ago
Balas HalfX
Ahhhhh. I see. :D Thank you very much for your insight. :)
The stench of feces and decayed food filled the cages, and vomit and other bodily fluids seeped into the floor. Unlike her room, the cages were kept heated, making the bait smell up to high heaven. The scent makes it easier for the pups to track their prey. The entire room was filled top to bottom with 5x5 cages. Depending on how the family was feeling, some cages had only one person in them while others were cramped to see how many could fit in them. Fortunately, they just had a chase so most of the cages were empty. The ones who had survived were placed in individual cages, many chewed up from their ordeal. Whimpers filled the room as well as the labored breathing of others. The hunts were brutal and only when one more of the prey was left standing would the victor be allowed to either die by their own choice or be enslaved to the family. Their minds were lost from the horrors they had faced in the hunt. Most chose to die, refusing to be forced into slavery, and decided that death was the better option. Laverna had chosen life.
Master and Fox: A Tale of Forbidden Love, War, Honor, and Duty
Fantasi · ShinSoma
ShinSoma2 years ago
Balas HalfX
XP Family? What's that? Do you mean EXP? Like Experience? Haha
The stench of feces and decayed food filled the cages, and vomit and other bodily fluids seeped into the floor. Unlike her room, the cages were kept heated, making the bait smell up to high heaven. The scent makes it easier for the pups to track their prey. The entire room was filled top to bottom with 5x5 cages. Depending on how the family was feeling, some cages had only one person in them while others were cramped to see how many could fit in them. Fortunately, they just had a chase so most of the cages were empty. The ones who had survived were placed in individual cages, many chewed up from their ordeal. Whimpers filled the room as well as the labored breathing of others. The hunts were brutal and only when one more of the prey was left standing would the victor be allowed to either die by their own choice or be enslaved to the family. Their minds were lost from the horrors they had faced in the hunt. Most chose to die, refusing to be forced into slavery, and decided that death was the better option. Laverna had chosen life.
Master and Fox: A Tale of Forbidden Love, War, Honor, and Duty
Fantasi · ShinSoma
ShinSoma2 years ago
Balas HalfX
Kinda. Haha. But she's not a raccoon girl, she's a fox girl.
Laverna softly yawned listening to the birds arise as she knew she must too. The soft click of the door could be heard as she got up and out of bed. A shiver ran through her spine as the chilled air graced her bare skin which the dark brown potato sack did not cover. Outstretching her arms she felt her spine crack and purred softly in delight. "It's the small things..." She thinks softly to herself before pushing off the cot. The female was rather small, only standing 5'2 and weighing only 115 pounds. Her long orange hair sat in tangles that fell down her back as the natural waves swayed in her movements as she moved toward her chest. Pulling it open, she smiles softly as the scent of lavender fills her nose. The drying petals were another small thing that seemed to bring her happiness. She carefully drew out another potato sack and pulled her night one off her and put the new one on. The scratchy material irritated her skin leaving small patches of red as she threw on a clean pair of undergarments as well.
Master and Fox: A Tale of Forbidden Love, War, Honor, and Duty
Fantasi · ShinSoma
ShinSoma2 years ago
Balas HalfX
So how do I split it? For example, this paragraph can split into 2 paragraphs instead?
The softest chirping of birds echoed through the tiny window, while the sun shone through the tiny slits in the wood that lit up the musty room. A rusty cot had been placed in the right corner of the room while a table with a stool sat on the left, and next to the cot was a broken nightstand. The contents on top of the nightstand were only a small mirror and a candlestick. A nub remained of a white candle that had burned through the night. Wax coated the smallholder and dripped onto the ground leaving dried wax that seemed to outstretch the candle but would never reach home again. A makeshift rug had been made with strips of fabric that once had been a blanket. The makeshift rug had been placed in the center of the room, a barrier between the freezing stone flooring and one's feet. On top of the table was a small bowl filled with water either for drinking or bathing while a wooden hairbrush sat next to the bowl. Another candle had been placed on this table, the candle far less used than the nub that remained of the other. Towards the table on the right sat on the ground a small chest that contained clothes, toiletries, and any other item the small vixen was able to procure, which was not much. She had scrounged everything she owned, grateful that they now seemed to ignore her unless their anger got the better of them. No longer used as a dog's chew toy she had earned her role. After the brutal death of the previous caretaker, she was granted the role of caretaker of the residence, but to a home that did not want her.
Master and Fox: A Tale of Forbidden Love, War, Honor, and Duty
Fantasi · ShinSoma
ShinSoma2 years ago
Balas HalfX
Yeah. Some people speak a second language. There's always the common language, and there are others, varied depending on race/study.
He waited for a few moments for the ship to completely stop and lay down the Bridge for them to disembark. He can hear various languages, mostly unrecognizable, but knowing this, he knows that every living being in this world uses the Common Language. He hears about sales, and some recruiting to the Hunter's Guild. To make money, he needs to do stuff so he can get started on a new life on this continent.
Master and Fox: A Tale of Forbidden Love, War, Honor, and Duty
Fantasi · ShinSoma
ShinSoma2 years ago
Balas HalfX
Is "riding horses" the right term if the horses are attached to a carriage?
Shin nodded, smiling at the coachman. They shook hands after Shin rides the Carriage. Yuri and Shin waved farewell to one another as he is off to his first mission. The coachman introduces himself as "George Applebee". He stands at 6'0, has dark skin, wearing the Guild's Coachman Uniform. Shin Shin almost slipped his true name, but he corrected his name and said his other surname. George raised his eyebrow and didn't mind the quick mistake. Shin is in awe of the nice breeze of the outdoors. He can see meadows and plains with farms and even friendly travelers they meet. For a long while on their journey, they talk about the metal horses and how to ride them. George the coachman teaches Shin about how to drive the horses, giving him a chance to drive for a little while since their destination is around the border of Laginaple. That is where this 'illustrious' mystery family is located.
Master and Fox: A Tale of Forbidden Love, War, Honor, and Duty
Fantasi · ShinSoma
ShinSoma2 years ago
Balas HalfX
Yeah. XD It's another rendition of EssaTerra, so the spelling also has changed. It's a spoiler. XD
Shin woke up, feeling well-rested after he traveled a month and a half from his homeland of Japan. His country is from the far east, so going there and coming to the Western Continent will take longer by boat than by airship. But he wanted to keep his budget to a minimum in case he needs it, as well as hide his identity from the people coming after him. He wanted to make a name for himself in a land where nobody knows him, hoping that the influence of his enemies won't reach even the North, West, the rest of the East, and the South of Essaterra.
Master and Fox: A Tale of Forbidden Love, War, Honor, and Duty
Fantasi · ShinSoma
ShinSoma2 years ago
Balas HalfX
I'll keep that in mind. Thank you for your comment.
The world of EssaTerra is beautiful. The legend goes that EssaTerra was built by God-King Rudaliz and Goddess-Queen Lusamina. In the creation of the world, the Goddess-Queen created the 'Meus', the essence of soul and magic while the God-King created the 'Povus', the essence of life and embodiment of physical being. In the ancient tongue, Meus and Povus roughly translate to 'Mana' and 'Ki or Kai/Chi' respectively. Mana is the source of Magic in the world, and Ki, or Kai/Chi, is the source of pushing the body to its physical limit. With the harmony of Meus and Povus, the God King and Queen created and birthed all manners of life. They created the world in the likeness and image of their imagination and modeled the structure of the world with peace and order.
Master and Fox: A Tale of Forbidden Love, War, Honor, and Duty
Fantasi · ShinSoma

Master and Fox: A Tale of Forbidden Love, War, Honor, and Duty

Full Title - Master and Fox: The Devoted Bond of Blades of Passion: A Tale of Forbidden Love, War, Honor, and Duty In the world of Essaterra, Shin was forced to flee from his land and start anew. Determined to rebuild what he had lost, Shin set out on a journey of self-discovery and adventure. He knew that the only way to exact his vengeance and take back what had been taken from him was to make a name for himself, to become someone feared and respected in the eyes of all. Along the way, Shin met a woman named Laverna. She was a slave, owned by a cruel and heartless master who treated her as nothing more than property. But Laverna was a survivor, and she knew that in order to stay alive, she needed to do whatever it took to please her master. So he took Laverna under his wing, training her in the ways of combat and strategy. He taught her how to fight and how to survive, and in turn, she became his loyal companion and trusted ally. Together, Shin and Laverna set out to rebuild what had been taken from them, each one relying on the other for survival in a world that had left them both broken. And as they journeyed together, Shin's thirst for vengeance burned hotter than ever, and Laverna was forced to confront the reality of the man she had come to rely on. Will love get in the way of their goal? Or not?

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