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Garbage story development. I am not against harem but only when they are well done the moment the human girl appeared I already knew things were fucked. She had no reason to ever grow attached to the Mc whatsoever and yet she does. It feels forced and only make you hate her to the bones. Next is the Mc he is unlikeable but I believe in growth potential. I read until the money paywall and it seems to be heading in a good direction. finally for anyone saying. You should read further. Nyla become likeable bla-bla-bla. Full of bullshit. If a novel can’t make me want to continue it even tough I have to pay. No matter if the story “improves” it is still gonna be trash. Rip for Lia though she was a good one as as for a potentially ok mc. But the rest is just plain trash.

Writing Quality : good enough Stability of Updates : nothing to say, very good. Story Development : everything feel forced and especially the romance. I am only at chapter 5 yet I the story does not interest me even though the synopsis promised some great things. it's so bad and so boring i could not read more than 5 chapter. Also cliche left, right and center. Character Design : boring . don't have a proper and original personality, looks like an mc from a isekai manga. the mc has lived for more than 5000 years in a cultivation world yet don't want to kill. He made a promise to see his wife which he hold for 5000 years yet the moment he arrives, he is like some saint going around saving a village and curing some kids like he is a messiah. His personality and way of acting does not correspond to a 5000 years old supposed monster who was nearing godhood. All in all. very different from what i was expecting from the synopsis. World Background : basically earth but it's china type. the same as every urban fantasy novel outhere. Very disappointing, i could only read 5 chapter before smashing my tables at how boring it was and how it wasted my time and hope. Don't read at all, advice from me. You will be met with a dispappointing story...

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If you're not happy feel free to shut the f up

hey author can we see fall heaven again, it's like more than a hundred chapter since we last saw him talk at least, everyone enjoyed his presence i think

very bad twist

Why is he so mad ? i can't understand him