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Thanks for the chapter. I will say, it's a bit weird to see him being harshly punished, he was attacked first by someone older, heavier and didn’t stop, something that hasn't been mentioned so far, but would be clearly relevant.

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter, I guess since it happened just outside an office, there would be cameras? Would be interesting if the footage of the fight was leaked or something.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

I recommend you stick with Marvin's POV, but you can occasionally switch to other character POVs If needed. Just make sure that it is clear who's POV we are reading.

Thanks for the chapter