Nathan_Gardner

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Nathan_Gardner2 years ago
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the meteorite was on paradise island not pine city.
The first-generation meteorite should still be there!
Global Game: AFK In The Zombie Apocalypse Game
Permainan · Empire Black Knight
Nathan_Gardner2 years ago
Berkomentar
annnnnnnd... you lost me. too many numerical inconsistencies
The tester knew Lu Yu. He remembered that during the test last year, he was only slightly over 1000 kilograms and barely managed to maintain his status of a Grade 1 Martial Arts Warrior.
Awakening The Gluttony Talent: I Become Stronger By Eating
Perkotaan · I Don't Eat Takeout
Nathan_Gardner2 years ago
Berkomentar
i thought he didnt have the devour sequence yet? how is he doing this?
As long as it was edible, the whole cave was eaten up by Ye Feng.
Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime
Fantasi · Blue Soft Dough
Nathan_Gardner2 years ago
Diterbitkan
very great read, really hope that it continues. i was so hooked when i was reading this. im really looking forward to when the break is over
My Plunderer System
Fantasi · Kowatch24
Nathan_Gardner3 years ago
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dude, some consistency in your names of thing a would lead to alot less confusion... like you literally just called these skills something else in the last paragraph.
[Water Bomb: After a short period of gathering the elements, it will form a water bomb in the air. If it hits the enemy, it will produce a repelling effect.]
Taming Beasts to Survive: I Can See the Prompts
Timur · Global Game
Nathan_Gardner3 years ago
Berkomentar
noticed a few times you wrote "stated" instead of "started".
The day's travel had gone pretty uneventfully with the party begin attacked only once by a pack of wolfs that they were easily able to take care of. Setting up camp again for the night next to a small pond the merchants and adventures started to cook up a feast from the bear meat Marcus was carrying in his item box. One of the merchants who was well versed in cooking, took out the largest pot the group had and stated making a stew. He of course used the bear meat as the main ingredient followed by plethora of vegetables. He added wild mushrooms found nearby in the forest, carrots and potatoes, and many other vegetables Marcus had never seen. They even added a number of spices to the stew enhancing its flavor to another level.
Transmigrated as a Ghost
Fantasi · MegaC
Nathan_Gardner3 years ago
Berkomentar
what about him leveling up but not showing his current level?
Also, if you find loop holes, feel free to tell me as well. Thank you for reading and may all of you have a blessed day.
Reincarnated With The Strongest System
Fantasi · Elyon
Nathan_Gardner3 years ago
Berkomentar
i thought it disappeared?
Learning that Rebecca had a high magic aptitude, Dave decided to give her a Skill Book of Small Fireball, so she would study a spell until she increased her spirit; doing homework before being able to learn the skill.
The World Cataclysm
Fantasi · JustAWanderer
Nathan_Gardner4 years ago
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that must've been messy
Before long, more bodies filled the skies between them. Kace rapidly depleted the remaining charges in the pistols. Firing shits off in all directions, each one reaping the life of a hero.
My (Monster?) Hero Life
Fantasi · Antihero
Nathan_Gardner4 years ago
Berkomentar
loving it but seems to not have enough of the "system". i keep reading hoping more of the gaming system shows up but its taking so long.
Ch 67 Interruption
Hero System! Transported to Another World
Fantasi · Ripcorez