_Khaled_
I like to write short fanfics since no one does the ideas that I have in my mind :)
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_Khaled_1hBerkomentarmaiden? Really?
Lin Yi didn't respond and walked straight into the hall. Yu Niang, who was attending to the guests, changed her expression slightly after seeing him. She immediately put on a smile and leaned towards Lin Yi, "Master Lin, you're here. Which maiden will you choose tonight?"- _Khaled_1dBerkomentar
Take the money from the corpses
Gu Yang returned to the caravan and said: "Dispose of the body. Also, since we encountered bandits this time, you will have to pay more when we get back." - _Khaled_3dBerkomentar
should have sent to luck
Major Fate changed= 7 - _Khaled_23dBerkomentar
I think namek ones don’t do that
Porunga holds up and 'OK' sign before disappearing, the Dragon Balls flying into the air and scattering throughout the planet. - _Khaled_1mthBerkomentar
Bro is yapping
"It's rude to point at people. Weren't you two young ladies taught manners? As for you, fellow young master with an ass for a mouth, what my battlemaid does or says has nothing to do with you. Us pair of master and servant do not value your opinion. But if you were looking for attention by bullying my maid, I do have advice for you. Next time open your mouth in a gathering where your footlickers are gathered, and you'll get it. I do not like to bicker with fools, but I made an exception just for you three. I hope this experience has been enlightening. You don't need to thank me for this. Adieu," Valerius calmly butchered the trio with his glib tongue. - _Khaled_1mthBerkomentar
Wasn’t he a unique demon? Why does he need to he in a dungeon
Mark's face turned cold, and he also noticed one vital aspect. The small hair that flew stuck to the javelin was instantly burned into ashes as it passed within a five-meter radius. - _Khaled_1mthBerkomentar
What about teaching them to hide their Ki so they wont be discovered ?
For the next few hours, I help get my family and friends settled into their new houses. They weren't all that lavish, but neither were the accommodations on Planet Vegeta, so they will be just fine. - _Khaled_1mthBerkomentar"Don't forget us, Kakarot!"
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Save the good ones and the rest can perish
"There's no wrong answer. We either save Planet Vegeta or let it be destroyed. Which are you going to choose?" - _Khaled_1mthBerkomentar"They're not clones." Cooler spoke, grabbing the attention of Dore and Neiz. "He's moving so fast that it appears to be multiple of him."
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Logia is an obvious NO, Paramecia like gravity, teleport,telekeesis would be good
I would like to know what your thoughts about MC getting a devil fruit is, if he should get one or not, if yes then what would be a good fit ?even non cañon fruit can be considered, please share me your thoughts on comments. - _Khaled_1mthDiterbitkan
(Heavy Spoilers) Dislikes: -Traders: Apart from Ochirmaru the MC hasn't traded with anyone else worth noting, I would love to see him trade with Aizen or Kisuke from bleach, Dr.Gero from Dragon Ball, Frieza from Dragon ball. Or more one piece material(They were many mentions of Doffy with his nickname Joker but nothing that important) -The powers, MC through his trading system acquired many power systems(Like chakra from naruto ...) and it became very hard to keep track of all of them, I would have enjoyed it more If the story was heavily focused on famous power systems like chakra. -Unique abilites: Apart from the Sharingan the MC didn't recieve any unique ability, Anything he bought either was an item to boost his strength or a technique, In my opinion it would have been better if he bought a devil fruit or a stand or a transformation Apart from what I mentioned everything is good, the pace(I think canon just started at chapter 57) , Diaougle.... In shorter terms I hope the mc would get more unique abilites and trade with anyone noteworthy other than the snake pedo
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No
"Is letting them go really a good idea?" - _Khaled_2mthBerkomentar
Did you forgot that you got killed?
"I'll take care of the androids for you, both in the future and if need be, in the past as well." - _Khaled_2mthBerkomentar
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Raditz's didn't fly up here, no, he was standing on a machine and floating upwards, very much like an elevator. - _Khaled_2mthBerkomentarCh 72 Chapter 70 - Premeditated Move
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What a braindead comment, your name probably sounds complicated to them and they’d prefer something like sakauzui or something
Garp and Kuzan, wondering what Sakazuki was planning in his mind, narrowed their eyes at the man with distrust within them. - _Khaled_2mthBalas nightwolf2007
I think in japanese mustache is the same as beard so in reality he’s Whitemustache
"Big Mom and Kaidou's deeds have gotten out of control. Ignoring our presence, they plundered and killed every single person that they've come across, expanding their influence and asserting their dominance in the New World. And the ones who've been restricting their malicious acts weren't us, but 'Whitebeard' Edward Newgate and his pirate crew!" Sengoku gritted his teeth with evident rage, - _Khaled_2mthBerkomentar
My boy taught three emperors
"And here, is where we stay." Doll placed her hand out, with palm facing above, "The Elite Marine Training Facility, built by the personal request of the instructor Zephyr. Just like you three, I only came here around a month ago, but I can tell you with confidence that he is, without a doubt, the best teacher in the whole world."