Othy

Is he receiving the memories of a third person or a previous run of his current body with someone else in it?

And then he dictum!

Why didn’t he just leave when his mother died? Or better yet, leverage his magical aptitude to protect his morher before she died.

Thirteen because Thirteen is two better than Eleven; makes my story two better than Undcientific Beast Taming.

I gotta admit I’m concerned the female lead’s name looks like a play on Mary Sue.

I’d be asking for a police escort away from the location.

Pierces works as well.

How many points per tendy?