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Frozentech

Frozentech

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2019-03-30 BergabungGlobal
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech1mth
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    Why the fuck is he trying to solve the Malgraves problem? He doesn’t not need to involve himself with another family when he just got out of a war. He needs to learn how to cut off his loses. Now he even lost more money to key the sinking traded deal alive. His products are top of the line. People will come to him if the Malgraves cut ties with him. He just needs to advertise.. he dont need the Malgraves.. This is just stupid You need to be alive first to enjoy that trade deal. Either Alexander suddenly turn dumb or the Author is forcing him to be dumb just for stary sake.

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    Peperangan · FerriticMatrix
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech1mth
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    How many readers do you think dropped this story because of this extra-long flashback? Theres like over 20 chapters of useless chapters. The flashback if too long... We don't care about the story of the past since that already failed. Flashbacks are ok if there only 3 - 5 chapters only.. But 20 chapters of continuous chapters. Its a shame this was one of the stories I read every day.. But now... I don't even care about the release. I'm just waiting for the story to comeback to the current timeline.

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasi · Raos_IOI
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech1mth
    Balas DiabloRedfox

    I hate this entire rise and fall arc. They taking thier sweet time discussing stuff that does not have any meaning to the current timeline. We dont care about Leonards plans in the past. What i want to know is how is this man that is watching the MC memories.. that is more interesting. Please go back to the current time line.

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasi · Raos_IOI
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    Frozentech1mth
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    Whats with this extremely long flash back. Do we really need 10 plus chpater if this? Go back to the new timeline. We dont need this. I hope next time author limits the flash back to a 3-4 chapters. Go back to the current timeline…

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasi · Raos_IOI
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech3mth
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    I gave this story another chance but.. I'm still getting hung up with how Blackout gets their information or their funding. The kingdom they belong to just lost in a war.. But they dont still have money to try funding a economic sabotage? And how come they move so fast? They can get information so fast? They even have the same level of technology with the MC now. Blackout is just too OP.

    Restart:Untalented Man
    Fantasi · Spartzan
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech3mth
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    Why did the updates slow down? Is the Author ok? is he sick or on vacation? What happened to the story? Why did the updates slow down? Is the Author ok? is he sick or on vacation? What happened to the story?

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasi · Raos_IOI
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech5mth
    Balas Frozentech

    Menes is the stupidest General I have ever read. He cant keep his army organized. They already made that same mistake while taking Theseli but makes the same mistake again when they fought Perseus. Then another stupid thing is trusting Manuk. He even gave them horses. Horses that are so important in the war. This is the second time he is giving away military supplies. Why are all of Alexander Generals so inept? They were mercenaries for thier entire adult life right? Didnt they learn anything?

    Herald of Steel
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech5mth
    Balas Frozentech

    Oh.. i hope he get better. Hoping for his recovery…

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasi · Raos_IOI
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech5mth
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    If Menes losses again, Alexander should replace this black general.. All he does it lose big battles. Why bring cavalry when you just want to play hide and seek in the Hills? This Menes is so inept as a commander / general.

    Herald of Steel
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech5mth
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    What happened? Is been over 17 days since the last update? Are you still going to continue this or was this dropped? Are you in Vacation or something?

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasi · Raos_IOI
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech7mth
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    Is this related to Supreme Magus? The father of modern magic is Lith Verhan? Either that or the author was a avid reader of Supreme Magus. Author like to used the names of famous characters from other stories.

    Rebirth of the Ruined Noble
    Fantasi · Emberlight
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech7mth
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    I dont get it. Didnt he increase the security in the city because of all the spies? He even made sure the mana cystal mine is tighly monitored. But in just a couple of chapters somebody already manage to smuggy somthing out? And all he needed to do is to hide it in his boots? And what with this blackout agant still being there. Is the country integence that bad?

    Restart:Untalented Man
    Fantasi · Spartzan
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech7mth
    Balas FerriticMatrix

    A secret noble living in the city got his slave to talk with the enemy commander. And gave them a way in? - How? Its a siege. Theres even a curfew. That means nobody is in and nobody goes out. How did the slave go out? Didnt they say guards are getting executed for sleeping on the job? That means a lot of guards are now afraid to sleep on the job so they are guarding the city strictly. Then how did this super slave leave the city and also come back? And how lucky of Alex that the enemy got lost during the attack and hit the wrong target.

    Herald of Steel
    Peperangan · FerriticMatrix
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech7mth
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    I stopped reading this hoping to binge read several chapters for the Zanzan war start to end and up to recovery. I'm just sad.. Too many chapters had no effect on the main story. 8 Chapters on sexy time. 4 Chapters on how Mikaya is getting used. I just wish the Author would stop writing about sexy time that does not contribute to the story. You don't need to spend 4 chapters on sexy time. Just say they missed each other so much that they spent the whole night making love. You don't need 4 chapters describing how they made love. Thats just a waste of chapters.

    Herald of Steel
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech8mth
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    Please spoil me... - Who is Saint Scepter? - Where are the other GODs? - Which transmigrated person of history is Saint Scepter? - Who are all the Famous Transmigrated Persons in the past?

    I Became The Pope, Now What?
    Fantasi · MisterImmortal
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech9mth
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    HI, Can somebody spoil me? What happens in the war against Tibias? Does Zanzan fall to Tibias? Does Alexander come back to a broken city? or will they Win? 1. How come the royals are so optimistic about the war? In the previous chapters, they were so pessimistic about Zanzan chances when the coalition attacked them. Now they keep on saying Zanzan will survive when they already lost once.

    Herald of Steel
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech10mth
    Balas Frozentech

    It is even worse. 6 chapter of f*cking... tsk tsk tsk

    Herald of Steel
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech10mth
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    Couldnt get pass chapter 1. Too much description of how the lady looked like. It's like the Author is a teenager trying to find a way to project his fantasy. I skip chapter 1 hoping the real story begins in chapter 2 only to be treated with another smut scene with a maid. I will try to get pass chapter 2 and hopefully the real story begin at chapter 3.

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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech10mth
    Balas Frozentech

    Author making it sound that the Family of the attack location told people where the got the Iron. OK. but dont they still need to confirm this things? The timeline still doesnt fit.

    Herald of Steel
    Peperangan · FerriticMatrix
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  • Frozentech
    Frozentech10mth
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    Just wasted 4 chapters (515-518) on R rated scenes. I hope the Author stop wasting chapters on this stuff. Just concentrate on the world building and story progression. 4 chapters on F*cking is just wasteful.

    Herald of Steel
    Peperangan · FerriticMatrix
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