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Love this but.. Why is Orpal still alive? He is not even a good villain. Please eliminate him or give him a end worse than death. I hope they suck their magic out of him.

Why the fuck is he trying to solve the Malgraves problem? He doesn’t not need to involve himself with another family when he just got out of a war. He needs to learn how to cut off his loses. Now he even lost more money to key the sinking traded deal alive. His products are top of the line. People will come to him if the Malgraves cut ties with him. He just needs to advertise.. he dont need the Malgraves.. This is just stupid You need to be alive first to enjoy that trade deal. Either Alexander suddenly turn dumb or the Author is forcing him to be dumb just for stary sake.

How many readers do you think dropped this story because of this extra-long flashback? Theres like over 20 chapters of useless chapters. The flashback if too long... We don't care about the story of the past since that already failed. Flashbacks are ok if there only 3 - 5 chapters only.. But 20 chapters of continuous chapters. Its a shame this was one of the stories I read every day.. But now... I don't even care about the release. I'm just waiting for the story to comeback to the current timeline.

I hate this entire rise and fall arc. They taking thier sweet time discussing stuff that does not have any meaning to the current timeline. We dont care about Leonards plans in the past. What i want to know is how is this man that is watching the MC memories.. that is more interesting. Please go back to the current time line.

Whats with this extremely long flash back. Do we really need 10 plus chpater if this? Go back to the new timeline. We dont need this. I hope next time author limits the flash back to a 3-4 chapters. Go back to the current timeline…

I gave this story another chance but.. I'm still getting hung up with how Blackout gets their information or their funding. The kingdom they belong to just lost in a war.. But they dont still have money to try funding a economic sabotage? And how come they move so fast? They can get information so fast? They even have the same level of technology with the MC now. Blackout is just too OP.

Why did the updates slow down? Is the Author ok? is he sick or on vacation? What happened to the story? Why did the updates slow down? Is the Author ok? is he sick or on vacation? What happened to the story?

Menes is the stupidest General I have ever read. He cant keep his army organized. They already made that same mistake while taking Theseli but makes the same mistake again when they fought Perseus. Then another stupid thing is trusting Manuk. He even gave them horses. Horses that are so important in the war. This is the second time he is giving away military supplies. Why are all of Alexander Generals so inept? They were mercenaries for thier entire adult life right? Didnt they learn anything?

Oh.. i hope he get better. Hoping for his recovery…

If Menes losses again, Alexander should replace this black general.. All he does it lose big battles. Why bring cavalry when you just want to play hide and seek in the Hills? This Menes is so inept as a commander / general.